Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-30021602-20161031232415/@comment-17702900-20161101090715

Hi ! Youd did a great job, but I believe 黄金 is read ougon, and not kogane in this song, so : Kogane ni kagayaku sugata -> Ougon ni kagayaku sugata Kogane ni kisu gihō -> Ougon ni kisu gihou

Also : Kono yo no kotowa -> Kono yo no kotowari

As for your translation, we'll need the opinion of Damesukekun, as he's a native Japanese speaker. The song is really pretty !