User blog:Vaffisuco/Tentative Translation for Blame of Angel

Found a pre-existing translation on youtube through Kisekikui, and while not completely off the mark, there were some misread sections that could use polishing. Since Blame of Angel is in need of a English translation, I decided to try my own hand at it and make this a blog post containing a rough draft of the English translation. Blame of Angel wikia page can be found here.

Born in order to only serve you, my body is manufactured

Everything about us, souless angels called 'toys', exists to satisfy you

If the chains restraining us were undone, and if we could spread our wings and go out into the world,

Could that make these shut-down emotions awaken?

I want to break the law that states we only live to satisfy you

My worn-out-heart's wings are torn off, and as I am unable to take flight, I plummet to the ground

I shoulder the burden of created sin, and no matter how much I atone

We are still branded as white, fallen angels, a label we cannot remove

Could the light still not seen on land/this earth weave together the chains of our hearts?

You, who I found in a dream...if I abandon myself to these chains

Would you teach me about the meaning of the word 'love'?