Talk:インヤンカンケイ (Yin Yang Kankei)/@comment-2603:9000:D116:D500:E5CD:5BBB:B2E:362C-20190329054858/@comment-26239285-20190329222852

The translation had errors including


 * やり過ごす means "do too much of", not "spend time"
 * 絶対 means "absolutely" not "in short"
 * 焦がれる means "yearn" not "burn"
 * 触れたら means "If I touch you" not "I will touch you"
 * 身分 means "social status" not "identities"

There was a lot that seemed OK, but there were too many mistakes. Plus I couldn't understand some lines myself so I couldn't be sure the translation was OK for those.

Have a go at learning some more Japanese and then feel free to try again.