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Planetarium no Shinjitsu
Hi, just wanted to ask something about the translation of this song below. Damesukekun checked them and said there were grammatical and wording errors, but I wanted to know if the translation is completely unusable, or can be improved with a few tweaks.

''Even if you had the whole world in your hands You'd get bored with it soon enough That's why I hide myself from you''

The master key concealed in the pocket I made sure that it was still there again and again Like I was holding a ticket for two made of stars

Old rows of houses, a faded STOP sign You know, I wouldn't mind living here But only if you were with me

Our future projected on a planetarium Temporary galaxies and feelings Let's sing with the constellations of the 2 AM sky tonight We don't need a reason A life with you and me in it Those are the days I want to keep picturing in my mind Every minute, every second

The scenery I see from the passenger's seat May be different from the one you see in your mirror Just believe in the warmth we feel from each other's fingertips

I was in the shade, looking out at the sunny side of the street The one who reached out to me was you Nobody else but you

Our future projected on a planetarium Temporary galaxies and feelings Let's sing with the constellations of the 2 AM sky tonight We don't need a reason A life with you and me in it Those are the days I want to keep picturing in my mind Every minute, every second

When the prelude starts to play We blow out the candle over and over I want to be the star that shines on your street at night Hiding your sadness deep inside You spun those words of love for me Now I want to make it up to you with everything I have

Our future projected on a planetarium Temporary galaxies and feelings Let's sing with the constellations of the 2 AM sky tonight I won't let anyone say that this isn't real A life with you and me in it Those are the days I want to keep picturing in my mind Every minute, every second

On that day I saw The truth on a planetarium

There's a translation in the CC as well, just in case you want to check that too.

Thank you!!

SolarTwT (talk) 08:16, September 30, 2019 (UTC)

Removing NSFW lyrics
Hey,

I've just gotten a list from Tokina with pages deleted from VLW which had NSFW lyrics:

Gay Sex 超強烈快感嗡嗡嗡震動 (Chāo Qiángliè Kuàigǎn Wēngwēngwēng Zhèndòng) 淑女ベリィの作り方. (Shukujo Berry no Tsukurikata.) 赤と白と黒の系譜 (Aka to Shiro to Kuro no Keifu) ヴェノマニア公の狂気 (Venomania-kou no Kyouki) 標本少女 (Hyouhon Shoujo) Secrets of Wysteria Halloween Candy Funky Husky Cool Girls Broken child 警察蜀黍!!! 就是这个人!!! (Jǐngchá Shǔshǔ!!! Jiùshì Zhège Rén!!!) 叶公好龙 (Yègōnghàolóng) 援交ラプンツェル (Enkou Rapunzel)

I've also gotten a list with songs which had their lyrics removed. I've already removed some lyrics from pages which were on that list, and I'll get to the rest at a later time. I have to get to work now, but I'll send you a follow-up message about this later. Amandelen (talk) 09:23, September 30, 2019 (UTC)

I've removed the lyrics of the songs you mentioned. Some thoughts on the others:
 * I agree with your first point ("One reason... is extreme."). They probably removed the lyrics to make absolutely sure that they're complying with fandom's TOU. I'm not sure if we should do the same, since as you said the singer of the song and the narrator are not always the same person.


 * 叶公好龙 (Yègōnghàolóng): Moke it quite clearly drawn as a minor. The lyrics don't seem to be that sexual at first glance, but it is very much implied. I think due to that and the TOU's prohibition of describing non-consensual sex it was removed I think.
 * 赤と白と黒の系譜 (Aka to Shiro to Kuro no Keifu): This song loosely describes rape (I wrapped my cold fingers... The "white" that you gave me that day). It was likely removed for the same reason as 叶公好龙 (Yègōnghàolóng).
 * ヴェノマニア公の狂気 (Venomania-kou no Kyouki): Technically the described acts are non-consensual since the women were under Venomania's spell. I guess that's why it was removed?
 * Secrets of Wysteria: This song is about Albert Fish (honestly I suggest not reading the wikipedia article that I linked; it is very disturbing). He was a serial killer and child rapist. I think it has been removed due to that.
 * Amandelen (talk) 13:16, September 30, 2019 (UTC)


 * Hello (again),


 * Gave Amandelen the right reasons for the 4 pages. Technically she got right for the 2 first and the last one. For Venomania, it's also because... You remember who was in the victims? An animal and a little child. So pedophilia, so unacceptable for Fandom. After to be honest we know the song is extremely known and that the deletion is being under debate, but actually... The other article which pushed this deletion is this one.


 * For Secrets of Wysteria it's also because... It's Oliver who sings this, and since he is underaged... :/ We would have serious issues. :( Tokina8937 (talk) 14:35, September 30, 2019 (UTC)

The TOU only prohibits "...any content that is obscene, pornographic, abusive, offensive, profane, or otherwise violates any law or right of any third party, or content that contains homophobia, ethnic slurs, religious intolerance, or encourages criminal conduct;". But the Fandom Guidelines says "For text, content that just mentions characters have sex is likely to be OK. But content that describes exactly how they have sex, is not. Content that describes violent or non-consensual sex is expressly prohibited.". I think it's a bit vague since they aren't really clear what they mean with describing. Does mentioning something or alluding to it (like 赤と白と黒の系譜 (Aka to Shiro to Kuro no Keifu)) describe non-consensual sex? Or should it be described more clearly than that? I agree that mentioning rape automatically being a violation seems a bit extreme, especially since Game of Thrones wiki exists, which even has an article on rape. It seems to me that the best way to go about it would be to remove lyrics if they detail rape any further than mentioning that it happened or alluding to it (or when the lyrics glorify it, obviously). So basically I agree with what you proposed. Amandelen (talk) 15:22, October 1, 2019 (UTC)

hinayuki
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OK-ybp0qRl0

LamazeP
我こそ昆布大使館 (Ware koso Konbu Taishikan)

Could you do the romaji for this? I found the lyrics on a blog post linked directly on LamazeP's NND upload so i assume he's the owner of the blog or so~Raine


 * Looks like Solar did it. I tried but my edit got lost since my internet has been up and down a lot. ElectricRaichu (talk) 02:45, October 4, 2019 (UTC)

Himitsukitchi
Watashi wa Himitsukichi Does this need to be downgraded or censored?

Thanks, nice to see more wholesome songs ( i mean, i like 'gritty' songs too but nice to have a break as well haha.)


 * It has enough violence and bad language that I don't think we should downgrade it. ElectricRaichu (talk) 04:49, October 7, 2019 (UTC)

Explicit Lyrics and such
Hey,

I've worked though all the pages that still needed action. There were four songs that were borderline that I saved for last, and I wanted to inform you on what I did with those:
 * I transferred the lyrics from VAPOR CANNON and リボルバー (Revolver), since it's pretty clear what is happening and not up to interpretation (at least to me).
 * I removed the part in Hot Milk where sex was described. I feel that the other parts do not describe anything as explicitly as the parts I removed, so that's why I only removed that part.
 * I didn't do anything to 炎の娘 (Honoo no Musume), since the sexual parts are dressed up in metaphors and it's not that apparent what's going on like in VAPOR CANNON.

Feel free to undo any edits I made if you disagree. I'm not entirely sure about some of them myself, but I figured it's better to be save then sorry when dealing with these last four ones. Amandelen (talk) 12:18, October 7, 2019 (UTC)


 * Oops I'd kind of forgotten about Secrets of Wysteria. I personally think the lyrics are vague enough to stay, but I did remove them just to be sure (as the removal can always be undone). We should definitely remove the link to the Wikipedia article, though. I've removed the whole mention of Fish to prevent people from easily looking it up. Amandelen (talk) 10:23, October 8, 2019 (UTC)
 * Also, get well soon! Amandelen (talk) 10:24, October 8, 2019 (UTC)

Gunjou Breath
群青ブレス (Gunjou Breath) Can you check the accuracy of the description/author's comment? (And maybe some of Kzzoldyck's other contributions too)


 * The comment was translated accurately, although the original has since been deleted. ElectricRaichu (talk) 22:21, October 12, 2019 (UTC)

Nonfiction girl
シン・ノンフィクションガール (Shin Non-Fiction Girl)

Can you translate this when you have time? I don't think ppl translate rerulili's songs as much anymore--Angel

Reflamer
Thanks, it's also on the CC now, it just needs approval

https://www.youtube.com/timedtext_editor?action_mde_edit_form=1&v=QX_zj6gmcHI&lang=en&bl=watch&ui=hd&ref=wt&forceedit=captions&tab=captions&o=U&ar=1570917064030

White House request
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RXhIQq8nCbM&feature=youtu.be

Shinoder
https://youtu.be/kGb__j0aIxQ

Congratulations!
Hi, just wanted to congrats on your daughter's wedding!!!! Wishing her lots of happiness and health

SolarTwT (talk) 06:21, October 16, 2019 (UTC)

prescriptoion
https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/Prescription Could you update the credits? Not exactly sure what "歌入れ" is (i assume tuning but just wanna make sure)


 * Replied to Solar, but it's not tuning, it's mixing the vocals with the soundtrack. ElectricRaichu (talk) 03:27, October 20, 2019 (UTC)
 * Ah, okay, thanks for letting me know, I'll update their other song page as well, then. ~Raine
 * Ah, okay, thanks for letting me know, I'll update their other song page as well, then. ~Raine

Could you delete a duplicate comment please?
Could you please delete my duplicate comment on a song page? The anonymous one from just before I made an account. I noticed that somebody put my song on here and out of excitement I commented. Then I realized commenting with an account would probably be a better idea.

https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/Energy/GarrisonLMorton

GarrisonLMorton (talk) 07:25, October 20, 2019 (UTC)GarrisonLMorton

Bo-zu
BO-ZU Can you translate this when you have time, please?--Raine

I second this! It's one of my favourite songs this year SolarTwT (talk) 11:06, October 22, 2019 (UTC)


 * OK I'll try and look at it next. If I forget, don't be shy to remind me. ElectricRaichu (talk) 01:36, October 23, 2019 (UTC)
 * Update: Looks kinda difficult. I'll try my best but I don't know if I can figure all of it out. ElectricRaichu (talk) 03:08, October 27, 2019 (UTC)

Will focusing more on the rhythm and keeping the translation loose in meaning make it easier to translate? SolarTwT (talk) 07:54, November 7, 2019 (UTC)


 * Seems to contain a lot of Buddhist terminology. I'd have to research them and it might take a lot of work to translate. Trying to match the rhythm adds an extra level of complexity. ElectricRaichu (talk) 08:00, November 7, 2019 (UTC)

Yup, a lot of Buddhist references. I tried looking up some words and they'd be quite difficult to translate into English. Rhyming 椀下げ and one's again seems so genius to me for some reason XD Idk how you'd capture the same thing in English. It seems super time-consuming... Edit: I'm not very sure, but looking at it again, it seems to me like it's about a ping pong battle?/training to be a ping pong champion? but likened to the training Buddhist monks undergo, as a metaphor. The prequel to BO-ZU also is centered around the game so it kinda makes sense. The illust for the song suggests the same.

Also, what do you think about Festfes? It seems similar to BO-ZU except there are modern music/internet slang references instead. Which one do you think would be easier to translate?

SolarTwT (talk) 08:29, November 7, 2019 (UTC)

Scattered dreams request
https://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm35698374 it's nice to see easypop still being active :3 ~Angel

Tieredcrisis
ティアードクライシス (Tieredcrisis) Could you look at this?

For 怡楽, "iraku" I hear a diff word? Or it sounds like there's an "S" or so in front of it


 * It sounds like chiraku or shiraku to me. I found an obscure word 至楽 shiraku in one dictionary that means something similar so it's possible that it's a typo. Unless we ask the songwriter, however, we probably won't know.


 * BTW the English translation of that line seems strange. 怡楽(or 至楽)に塗れた means steeped in pleasure and probably refers to 尸解, but they've just put "happily" in the previous line which understates what it's trying to say. 尸解 seems to refer to the spirit leaving a dying body, or to it leaving a dying body and becoming some kind of enlightened being.


 * I did some spot checks and AFAICT I can't see any other mistakes, but it looks like a very difficult song to translate and they may have their reasons for the strange way they translated that line. Again, unless we contact the translator, we won't know their reasons. ElectricRaichu (talk) 09:29, October 24, 2019 (UTC)

Noz/Zoo request
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KFEbVsctk1M

Leaving
Hello Raichu, Thank you always for your great contributions to Vocaloid fandom. My job and daily chores are really killing me recently, and I decided to leave the fandom. I keep my account, but I'll be inactive and won't take requests any longer. Now I say goodbye to you all. Damesukekun (talk) 04:25, October 26, 2019 (UTC)
 * I wish the best luck to you too. Damesukekun (talk) 03:46, October 27, 2019 (UTC)

Autophagy
オートファジー (Autophagy) Could you check the translation?


 * The translation has some errors. I could try to fix it but I'll ask the translator first. ElectricRaichu (talk) 03:55, October 27, 2019 (UTC)

Deco captions
https://www.youtube.com/timedtext_editor?action_mde_edit_form=1&v=MeJDOXsCFgw&lang=en&bl=watch&ui=hd&ref=wt&tab=captions&o=U&ar=1572156024084 Could you take a look over these?

EZFG
https://youtu.be/RYsbNNRcnqc

Still cold
Hey,

When you have the time, could you maybe check this translation? I'm not sure who to ask now that Damesukekun is gone, so I hope you don't mind orz. We'll probably have to figure out how we're going to check translations more easily soon. Amandelen (talk) 09:22, October 27, 2019 (UTC)


 * While I like the English rendering of some lines, there are several mistakes, unfortunately including a few that are quite misleading. I like the song so I'd like try to fix the mistakes. ElectricRaichu (talk) 08:20, October 28, 2019 (UTC)

The only active native Japanese speakers (that I know of) on the recommended list are Firingsniper and Mera. If Raichu isn't too sure with something, I guess we could ask them? Other than that, I guess we have to cross check with other translators; Migu39 is quite active here and Spicy Sweets will most probably respond too. SolarTwT (talk) 11:00, October 27, 2019 (UTC)


 * Yes we really need to do something. I'm often stumped by some phrases and lines, I'm hopeless at interpretations, and I'm not a fast translator, so I can't take it all on myself :( But if we can manage to get a reliable team together, that would be great. ElectricRaichu (talk) 08:23, October 28, 2019 (UTC)

That's totally understandable. We could try asking Firingsniper, Mera, Migu39, and Spicy Sweets if they're interested in checking translations as well. Amandelen (talk) 10:08, October 28, 2019 (UTC)


 * If they're interested, it'd be nice to have a way to share the work, for example, ask if people have preferred producers, music styles or vocaloids. ElectricRaichu (talk) 10:12, October 28, 2019 (UTC)

That's a good idea. That way it'll be a bit more appealing. Do you want me to contact them or will you contact them? Either way is fine by me. Amandelen (talk) 10:22, October 28, 2019 (UTC)


 * I'm fairly busy right now with different things so it would help if you could do it. ElectricRaichu (talk) 00:31, October 29, 2019 (UTC)


 * I'll start drafting up a message and hopefully get to it this weekend. Amandelen (talk) 09:43, October 31, 2019 (UTC)

Rumor
ルーマー (Rumor) Could you take another look at this? Damesuke checked it but I find the "Getting out of my hand, I... I admit yours'  line a bit awkward/confusing?


 * Yes that line and some others have some strange English rendering. The translation is loose but OK in some places, but in others it seems too inaccurate to me. ElectricRaichu (talk) 04:04, October 28, 2019 (UTC)
 * I've made some changes including that strange translation. ElectricRaichu (talk) 04:37, October 28, 2019 (UTC)

Thanks, and yeah, i found this https://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm35862719 so it was meant to be singable 'translyrics' rather than a direct translation so that explains it being a bit odd :P

22 Seiki no Bokura wa
Could you check this when you have time? Edit: Caption link https://www.youtube.com/timedtext_editor?action_mde_edit_form=1&v=4m7SfAs2h2w&lang=en&bl=watch&ui=hd&ref=wt&tab=captions&o=U&ar=1572346017097

Harapeko
https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/%E3%81%AF%E3%82%89%E3%81%BA%E3%81%93%E3%81%AA%E3%82%93%E3%81%A7%E3%81%99!!_(Harapeko_Nan_Desu!!)?oldid=497198 Could you take a look at this?


 * The translation had a lot of mistakes but I think I managed to fix it. ElectricRaichu (talk) 00:09, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

ララララララララーメン
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1cKTJR2rLFg New Rin song, i think it's their first song as well

Shitoo
https://www.youtube.com/timedtext_editor?action_mde_edit_form=1&v=EJe2uS6h3cg&lang=en&bl=watch&ref=wt&forceedit=captions&tab=captions&o=U&ar=1572325036003 Could you look over these captions?


 * They seem mostly right. If you copy them here, let me know and I'll fix a couple of things. ElectricRaichu (talk) 21:24, October 29, 2019 (UTC)
 * Yes, I'll be adding them in a bit ~Raine
 * I fixed a few things. I added some bits they had left out and I changed a couple of other bits. Some mistakes in Kzzoldyck's romaji: そういう風に, 風 is fuu, not kaze, and 食べちゃいたい is a contraction of tabete shimaitai, not tabete wa itai. ElectricRaichu (talk) 03:46, October 30, 2019 (UTC)

Poppin' Candy☆Fever!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JCZCz0XQfRk

Yurufuwa Jukai Girl
https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/%E3%82%86%E3%82%8B%E3%81%B5%E3%82%8F%E6%A8%B9%E6%B5%B7%E3%82%AC%E3%83%BC%E3%83%AB_(Yurufuwa_Jukai_Girl)?diff=prev&oldid=498033 Could you check their edits?


 * I didn't look at them in context, but just based on the amended lines, the corrections look good to me. In the dictionary, 不法占拠 seems to mean squatting rather than loitering but maybe it's a deliberate exaggeration and the edits didn't change that bit. ElectricRaichu (talk) 07:21, October 31, 2019 (UTC)

Re: ‎Days/EasyPop
As long as the song contains a VOCALOID it should be in scope, so Days should be fine! Amandelen (talk) 09:45, October 31, 2019 (UTC)

Translations and such
Hey Raichu,

I've approach Spicy Sweets and Migu and they're willing to help out (Firingsniper hasn't answered yet). I've made a blog post where I plan on keeping track of the translations that need to be checked and are checked so you guys don't have to do that. Spicy Sweet's would like to split the songs on genre, so which genre would you prefer to check? Amandelen (talk) 22:44, November 2, 2019 (UTC)


 * Depends on song really. I guess mostly into pop, folk, light rock, reflective, kiddy, country, classical. Not so much into heavy rock, jazz, blues, creepy, disco, dubstep. Are there any other genres? ElectricRaichu (talk) 00:20, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

That should be most of them. Some others I can think of are hip hop, latin, electronic in general, house, R&B, soul, and metal (but metal kind of falls under heavy rock). Amandelen (talk) 10:40, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Dandan
だんだん増えてゆく (Dandan Fuete Yuku) Could you translate this when you have time? I assume it's similar to the other "dandan" songs 40mp made :'D~Raine

Reku
レクの空走 (Reku no Kuusou) Could you look over this? I don't think eng is their first language, and it's mostly understandable but it'd be good to take a closer look since it's part of a song series/connected to other songs


 * I see what you mean. I haven't been that well the last few days but I'll try to look when I feel better. ElectricRaichu (talk) 04:59, November 6, 2019 (UTC)
 * https://www.youtube.com/timedtext_editor?action_mde_edit_form=1&v=xozXubyXn5I&lang=en&bl=watch&ui=hd&ref=wt&forceedit=captions&tab=captions&o=U&ar=1573186071008 There's also some on screen text only quotes/'dialogue' that might need editing as well

Thanks!--Angel

Nakanaka
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wDNypuyOi10 could you check their subs? (rapid flashing warning btw)


 * It's difficult to read the Japanese text and there are a lot of unfamiliar words, but from what I could follow in the first minute, there seemes to be lots of mistakes. ElectricRaichu (talk) 00:36, November 12, 2019 (UTC)

Lamaze Request
私のお話聞いてほしい (Watashi no Ohanashi Kiite Hoshii)

togenkyo
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=osXiVyM86F8

The Ghost of Romantic Tranceiver
Hey,

Would "I want my voice to reach." be a good translation of 私の言葉が届いてほしいの? That was the translation on this page before it was replaced by Hazuki no Yume's one (I got it from somewhere but I can't find the source anymore), and I'm thinking of replacing it with just that. Since it's only one sentence I thought I'd be a bit of a bother to here, which is why I'm asking you directly. Please take your time. Amandelen (talk) 19:07, November 14, 2019 (UTC)


 * I have retranslated the song. Since HnY's translation is the most likely intended meaning, you'll notice that I happen to have have translated it the same except I've added a footnote about the ambiguity. Adding a gratuitous difference has problems. Just stopping at "reach" makes the English feel incomplete. Translating とどく as "get to" makes it ambiguous: "I want my words to hurt you". "Be delivered" suggests an intermediary. You can say "what I have to say" instead of "my words". However, I agree with HnY that a simple literal translation works best. ElectricRaichu (talk) 23:05, November 14, 2019 (UTC)


 * I see. Thank you! Amandelen (talk) 17:56, November 15, 2019 (UTC)

才能なんか
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a0CppXeSN1s&feature=youtu.be

Some songs
Here are some songs I think you might like and could use a translation.


 * Dream Keeper
 * Otogi wa Gin no Kuni
 * Crush
 * _(Otousan,_Okaasan.) Otousan, Okaasan

Edit: Also, 6-7-5-1 and 雨ニ酔ウ already have translations so you can remove them from your requests list :)SolarTwT (talk) 05:50, November 17, 2019 (UTC)

うさぎwithがーる
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4EhinP-GTls

Apostrophe
The lyrics for the remix version of version Apostrophe is the same, except for a few lines. Could you please translate those? Thank you! SolarTwT (talk) 14:49, November 17, 2019 (UTC)

Grand caberet
https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/%E3%82%B0%E3%83%A9%E3%83%B3%E3%83%89%E3%82%AD%E3%83%A3%E3%83%90%E3%83%AC%E3%83%BC_(GRAND_CABARET)?diff=prev&oldid=503710 Can you look over this when you get a chance?

夢が終わる時
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pwqoUQxYZ24&feature=youtu.be

VnaneP
https://www.youtube.com/timedtext_editor?action_mde_edit_form=1&v=lTaVm7fI8lE&lang=en&bl=watch&ui=hd&ref=wt&tab=captions&o=U&ar=1574221049088 Could you look at these captions when you have time?

LamazeP
https://old.reddit.com/r/Kagamine/comments/e0sunw/i_made_very_rough_translations_for_lamazes_new/ Could you check this?


 * Most of it is fine, although I there are some minor issues. I already had a translation I was holding off because there are some lines that are open to interpretation. Since I prefer my interpretation to keizee's, I've uploaded my translation. ElectricRaichu (talk) 02:30, November 25, 2019 (UTC)

teishokup
流星メテエシカ (Ryuusei Meteeshika)

Could you check over this? I think they're on the neutral list, but it makes me think there might be some things not completely accurate if they couldn't really translate the title properly/fully either :P~Angel
 * There were a couple of things I think were incorrect and I improved the wording a little bit in places. There were mistakes in the lyrics too. ElectricRaichu (talk) 05:04, November 25, 2019 (UTC)

Avarice
Can you make a disamb page for these two songs, please?

Avarice

AVARICE


 * Done. ElectricRaichu (talk) 04:51, November 26, 2019 (UTC)

Odoryanse
https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/Special:Contributions/66.27.46.137 Can you check their changes?


 * They seem good. The 蛙 line is the only one that I can't be sure of but UtaTen is in agreement with the amendment. ElectricRaichu (talk) 04:47, November 26, 2019 (UTC)

Kilmer
https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/%E3%82%AD%E3%83%AB%E3%83%9E%E3%83%BC_(Kilmer)?diff=prev&oldid=505607 Can you check this too, please?


 * Takuri is wrong, it doesn't make sense. As far as I can tell it sounds like eri eri. You can listen here if you want to check too. The other possiblity is yori for either or both words but it sounds more like eri to me. ElectricRaichu (talk) 06:45, November 26, 2019 (UTC)

ハジメモノガタリ
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_oIBeeY5L3A Can you translate this when you have time? :)

Mubou
I see thanks for letting me know (that said, it's still the same ban-evader who doesn't really seem to listen/follow our guidelines that closely)

Hajime Monogatari
Yeah, I didn't notice anything too 'off' There are a couple parts where she goes super high/hard to make out the words but i don't think she said anything different~Raine

Fukusui no koi
https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/%E8%A6%86%E6%B0%B4%E3%81%AE%E9%AF%89_(Fukusui_no_Koi)?diff=prev&oldid=506078

Can you check their edits?


 * All look good. There's some archaic kana usage e.g. writing 込もう as 込まう which the edits fix the romaji for. ElectricRaichu (talk) 10:01, November 28, 2019 (UTC)

sweet dreams request
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lAhMzTKfpn0&feature=youtu.be

Thanks! Have fun in Japan, i'm sure you could prolly check out a snow miku event (like wasn't there an airport specifically dedicated to it but idk if it's the same airport you'd be going to lol)

Tips for improving translation quality?
Hello Electric, I am aware that you are Jp-En Translator in the Wikia. I notice my Zh-En translation skills and quality are no so good since the beginning of my trans. career. May you give me some tips for improving the trans. quality? Plz? :(

VocaloidDefence 13:58, December 2, 2019 (UTC)

Emon
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VABbZYMrik4&feature=youtu.be

Puryu
https://youtu.be/e18w1c6Ij2g

(Made the page now, it just needs additions lol)~Raine

なんでなの!?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2_ogGaRiiak

Gekkou Stage
月光ステージ (Gekkou Stage) When you have time, can you check if the 10th anniversary version has any differences that need to be added?


 * There were errors in the romaji, but the new version has the same lyrics as shown on the page. ElectricRaichu (talk) 04:56, December 26, 2019 (UTC)

猿芝居
Hello, I was wondering if you could look over a couple points on the translation for this song.

1) Would セリフ make more sense translated as something like "my lines," given the context?

2) Should 消した be translated as a different verb than 引いた in the second chorus?

Sorry to bother you if I'm just misunderstanding something simple. MeaningfulUsername (talk) 00:19, December 26, 2019 (UTC)

TKG
Hello,

I was looking through SouthSoilHime's pages and found TKG again, and I was wondering if "race" in たまごとごはんでＴＫＧ/Egg and race make TKG should be "rice"? It seems to me like a typo, but I thought I'd notify you just to be sure. Amandelen (talk) 08:13, December 28, 2019 (UTC)

sister request
https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/Sister/Mikito-P

Toota
maybe amandelen knows? I always just copy/pasted a translation line by line whenever i add someone's translation/subs :'D~Raine

Magical Doctor
https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/%E3%83%9E%E3%82%B8%E3%82%AB%E3%83%AB%E3%83%89%E3%82%AF%E3%82%BF%E3%83%BC_(Magical_Doctor)?oldid=513994 Can you check over this?

Re: editing help
There is no in-fandom way to do so, but by using Copytables (a chrome extension) you can easily copy-paste it. I've copy-pased the translation below using it! Hopefully this helps. Amandelen (talk) 20:53, December 29, 2019 (UTC)

You had said 'I want to be alone' While crying like a fool, That's what you said

If I would leave you behind, You would surely break I'm only here by your side So you will stay alive

I gather the thrown-away lights And return them to your heart And sew together the gaps between the stars So don't you come falling down on me

I pile the flower petals In order to catch you How many times have my arms been broken? If the soft strings of your heart Were tied like misanga, we could've been happy

You had said 'I want us to be together' While crying like a fool, That's what you said

If I would leave you behind, You would surely break I'm only here by your side So you will stay alive

I gather the lights you failed to find And return them to your heart And sew together the gaps between the stars So I take care about falling down

Avoiding the flower petals, I draw you closer to me How many times has my body been shattered? Even if the soft strings of your heart Were cut, our wishes wouldn't come true

(Falling further) My stretched-out hands grasp the skies (Falling further) My petrified legs face the sky as if kicking (Where are you?) Even though I hear your voice, (Where are you?) I can't see anyone But I notice the string dangling about "I've caught you,"

I say while falling down

Into the space between the flower petals, the two of us come falling down. How many times have our hearts been broken? When our hands that finally linked let go, It doesn't even matter if our wishes don't come true As long as you're here right beside me

Chain game
チェインゲーム (Chain Game)

Re: Magical Doctor
I can't say it with 100% certainty, but the hiragana looks like what was added and it also songs like what's being sung to me. I think it's fine. Amandelen (talk) 09:35, January 1, 2020 (UTC)

Autophagy
Autophagy has a translation from Releska now, so you can remove it from your list :) SolarTwT (talk) 11:08, January 5, 2020 (UTC)

Re:moonbow
We could ask Migu but I don't know their skill level compared to yours

Thank you for telling me that I am kinda shocked that my Japanese is bad but thats ok I keep learning and also I am better at Japanese then English so i can see why i messed up or maybe I can't but thank you!

Apostrophe
https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/%E3%82%A2%E3%83%9D%E3%82%B9%E3%83%88%E3%83%AD%E3%83%95%E3%82%A3%E3%83%BC_%28Apostrophe%29 Could you fill in the gap when you have time, please? :)

April blues
https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/April_Blues Only one line to translate :3--Angel

Iroha Uta
https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/index.php?title=いろは唄_%28Iroha_Uta%29&diff=510433&oldid=453126

Could you please check these edits?

Len (TLs)

 * No.1 ni Sasete
 * Mayoi no Mado Satori no Mado
 * Demo Demo Night

Some Len songs from the Magenetra group's request page. They seem to be popular among requesters so if you like them, consider translating these songs! SolarTwT (talk) 03:57, January 12, 2020 (UTC)

fashion kiru
ファッションきる (Fashion Kiru)  Could you translate this when you have time? :)


 * ... ... maybe ... ... the title can mean at least three different things! ElectricRaichu (talk) 23:36, January 14, 2020 (UTC)

Tamanegi
The translation added to 玉葱 (Tamanegi) was made by ShujiMikami, according to this comment on Damesukekun's blog. I remembered coming across it when I saw that you were trying to find out who translated it, I hope this helps!

Violet330 (talk) 18:34, January 14, 2020 (UTC)


 * Ah, thanks, I'll add the name. I'm glad Damesukekun said that it was a good translation. I was impressed too. ElectricRaichu (talk) 22:02, January 14, 2020 (UTC)

Cosmo
https://www.youtube.com/timedtext_editor?action_mde_edit_form=1&v=3nSO6Ad_Na4&lang=en&bl=watch&ui=hd&ref=wt&tab=captions&ar=1579049005059&o=U Could you look over these captions?

last knight battle
https://magenetratranslations.tumblr.com/post/190277502075/last-knight-battle


 * Oh wow they got hold of the other lyrics. Some bits are a bit cryptic though. If they ever release it as a video maybe there will be some clues as to how to interpret it. ElectricRaichu (talk) 05:59, January 16, 2020 (UTC)

夕闇街道
https://w.atwiki.jp/hmiku/pages/40589.html

ポジティブ・パレード
https://w.atwiki.jp/hmiku/pages/40613.html

Yakatora
https://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm36220177

君に愛は届かないと知っていても
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nn9p77jwdBg

ララバイ
https://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm35831755

Romaji
How would you do the romaji for ~んだ and ~んです? Like 言うんだ for example; is it "iu nda" or "iun da"? SolarTwT (talk) 18:32, January 20, 2020 (UTC)