User blog comment:Vaffisuco/Lady Face by TaKa Tentative English Translation/@comment-26239285-20180517042932

Damesukekun has already given you help with some lines, but I'll add a few more details.

微熱混じり 扉開いてみせて？
 * "みせて？" is a request, "will you show me [doing ...]?"
 * -te miseru basically means to show, and while it can sometimes have a feeling of "I'll prove to you", it could also mean to feign, or even simply to demonstrate doing something.
 * -混じり means "mixed with ...", so do the door opening in a manner mixed with a slight fever, which presumably is a euphemism for passion.

何もかも全部忘れて狂えばいいわ
 * When translating, it's a good idea to Imagine yourself in the situation. When you're in a state of intense infatuation, you wouldn't say "It'd be best ...". You would probably say "We can ..." or "Let's ..." or even better a direct imperative as Damesukekun put it.

変になるほど撫でてあげる
 * Literally, I'll caress you to the extent that you becoming crazy. I would have put it "I'll caresss you until you're crazy" but I think Damesukekun's translation might be better.

夢はいつか 冷めるモノだとしても
 * You're translation above is more for something like いつか冷めても. としても is a bit different, "even supposing that ...", i.e., "even if the dream one day fades".
 * I'm not sure what モノ does in this context and why it's in katakana. ... mono da can indicate an intensity of feeling but the context suggests the opposite which is why I'm uncertain ...
 * I'm not sure of the whole sentence either, but maybe it means something like "even if the dream fades one day, being 'a bad girl' doesn't stop."

アナタも同じ？
 * It's a question, so I guess it would mean, "Do you feel the same way?"

「寂しい夜そばにいて…」
 * This is probably a request, "Stay with me when I'm lonely ..." but she is unable to say it.

“埋め合わせ”
 * According to the dictionary, it means making up for a loss or something lacking. The noun form refers either to the act of compensating or the thing itself that is compensating.
 * From context, what's missing appears to be companionship. Since she can't bring herself to ask the other party to fill the need, she tries to fill it with passion.
 * If the quotation marks are used in a similar way to English, it could mean that she's calling something compensation that ordinarily would not be considered compensation. I would guess that lust or passion or whatever is doing a temporary job of filling the need, so it feels like compensation at the time, but it doesn't really satisfy in the long term.

アレもコレも きっと叶わないなら
 * It's not referring to things coming true but to her wish for her loneliness to be satisfied. "This and that", i.e., ordinary things won't satisfy her need. "Therefore, at least just for now, we love".

That's as far as I've got for now. Hope it helps.