User blog comment:Suujimatsu/Nayutan Seijin - Kinsei no Dance/@comment-26239285-20190423033453/@comment-26239285-20190424002907

If you're not feeling well, I find it better to have a rest and then come back later to take another fresh look. But I think your translation as it now stands is better than the one that's there now so feel free to replace it.

BTW how long have you been studying Japanese?