Talk:天使だと思っていたのに (Tenshi da to Omotte Ita noni)/@comment-31787157-20181219203136

While I feel that this translation is mostly good, I have an issue with the interpretation of the subject in these lines:

誰に習ってもいない賛美歌を歌って 誰に習ってもいない飛び方で飛んでいる

Currently these are interpreted to be things that "we" (the angels) are all doing, but I don't think this makes sense. If they're all doing the same thing, why would there be a "じわり開いてく差" between the singer and the other angels? I would submit the suggestion that the translation should instead be "singing hymns no one taught me / flying in ways no one taught me."

I hope this is an okay way to suggest corrections--I'm not on here much and I don't really know the etiquette, but this seemed better than just editing my correction in without asking.

-bluepenguin/EJ Translations