User blog:Kotoritachi/Translating Japanese to English

I was going to put this on the forum, but decided against it so I could edit this. I've been studying Japanese for around a year now (as in I'm not taking classes, but I'm trying to teach myself), and I tried to translate a song for the first time! Am I allowed to post the translation in this blog or a different one? I'd like to see how I did.

Thanks in advance, and have a nice day!