Talk:バラバラココロ (Barabara Kokoro)/@comment-68.187.232.52-20180228224902

On the 3rd to last paragraph 2nd line romaji appears to be missing 'tomodachi' after kawarazu and before gokko

On the paragraph above that not sure about the common romaji standards but "ittetan e tte" should probably be "itteta ne tte" similar to the way that 勝手だねって was split up 2 lines above. ね was used and splitting the n from the e makes it seem like it's 言ってたんえって instead of 言ってたねって

I'm not the best at Japanese so take it with a grain of salt but maybe it was worth bringing up  ¯\_(ツ)_/¯