Talk:鬼火 (Onibi)/@comment-32327493-20180519004011/@comment-26239285-20180519012206

OK, I made a few tweaks here and there. Please see what you think.

Only thing is I left these lines alone


 * 早く死んじゃえば？
 * Kill yourself now,
 * 早く死んじゃえば？
 * kill yourself now?

since I'm not confident I understand the nuance of the original.