User talk:ElectricRaichu

Past conversations: 2015 2016 2017 2018 2019

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Archiving old talk page content
You can also write your own, but I prefer to just copy-paste it.
 * 1) Make a new page called Talk:USER NAME/Archive 1 (so in your case Talk:ElectricRaichu/Archive 1).
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 * 1) Cut and paste the content from your talk page that you want removed into the new page.
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 * 3) Publish both pages

Tabber
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dateken
[//www5.atwiki.jp/hmiku/pages/39460.html https://www5.atwiki.jp/hmiku/pages/39460.html]

Searching
[//www.youtube.com/watch?v=KlviEkuSTOE https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KlviEkuSTOE]

Re: White Line
Thanks for your help. Next time I shall finish proofreading before uploading. Yet it's really hard for a non-native speaker like me to use the definite article correctly...well, there's certainly a long way to go. (^_^;)

Question
Hey, I was gonna add the romaji for fanservice but there isn't a vocaloid ver. so I wasn't sure if it technically belonged here? I mean if it does idm adding it? And how to go about crediting english translations made by someone on youtube who doesn't have an official site or anything?

Monambrose (talk) 03:27, June 27, 2019 (UTC) Monambrose

Noboru
[//www.youtube.com/watch?v=qeBMQM11ZEQ https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qeBMQM11ZEQ] Noboru did a "rock buster" ver of his old GUMI song for her anniversary :D (IDK if he changed any thing about the lyrics tho or it's just a new arrange/updated tuning)


 * Thanks for letting me know, I love it! I listened carefully and there are some subtle changes here and there. I'll have to make a separate version. ElectricRaichu (talk) 07:18, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

Hello. Apparently according to a close friend of mine, someone hacked into my account to post a mean comment in the comment section of this song :コールボーイ (Call Boy) and I was hoping if you could remove the messages please? I managed to shoo off the hacker, but they forced started this. :<

Mei-Saime (talk) 04:00, June 29, 2019 (UTC) Mei-Saime

Translation quality?
That seems like a good idea for me. I'll make a small template for that message soon. Amandelen (talk) 11:11, June 29, 2019 (UTC)


 * Okay I've made this. I'm not sure if I'm entirely happy with it yet, so I'll leave it be for today and finish it up tomorrow. If you have ways to improve on it feel free to change it or message me. Amandelen (talk) 12:02, June 29, 2019 (UTC)


 * While I'm here anyway, I've made a test infobox here. When you hover over "Producer(s)" with your mouse, it'll display the following message: "The lyrics on this page are available under Copyright. Please contact the producer before using the lyrics. If the producer(s) want their content to be removed, please leave a comment on this page or contact an administrator.". What are your thoughts on it? Amandelen (talk) 13:55, June 29, 2019 (UTC)

Thank you for the feedback! It helps me improve the templates. I've changed the message on the Unverified Translation template to yours. It might take a while for it to show up correctly on the template documentation, but posting it should give the new version. English is replaced with the original language of the lyrics. For example:. As for the infobox template, I mainly copied the message on the bottom of Lyrics Wiki pages, and I thought contacting an admin was the fastest way to remove the lyrics. I see how that might not be the best idea, though. I've changed the message to "The lyrics on this page may be subject to Copyright. If the copyright holder wants their content to be removed, please leave a comment on this page." for now, but it should probably be changed further in the future. As for artist verification, we might be able to ask for verification like Vocaloid Database does. I agree with keeping the page up when possible, and I've made a draft template with the reason the lyrics has been removed here (although I'm not really happy with the way the message is worded yet). Amandelen (talk) 12:40, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

PinocchioP
[//www.youtube.com/watch?v=QvO8kcWFFT0 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QvO8kcWFFT0]

虹色カメレオン
[//www.youtube.com/watch?v=x-R9vwYklHs https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x-R9vwYklHs] Very pretty for a first song :)

void
[//www.youtube.com/watch?v=vzDScCC_BJU https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vzDScCC_BJU]

UTAU
Hello! Hope you're having a good day.

Are we not allowed to add UTAU original songs to this wiki?

SolarTwT (talk) 10:20, July 4, 2019 (UTC)SolarTwT

Sorry that gakupo link was from me, i forgot to sign it, guess it got attached under solar's message :'D~Raine

Lunachu
[//www.youtube.com/watch?v=D3nDEsU1Vvo https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D3nDEsU1Vvo]

Romeo Re-try
Hey there! Here to remind you that I did another translation for Romeo. You can go to my talk page for more info. Gotta sleep. Bye! RandomAir BGM (talk) 04:08, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

キミマデ・ツーステップ
[//www.youtube.com/watch?v=fS2N_CyJFjg https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fS2N_CyJFjg]

polka dot alien
hello there! I have a question, are you still taking translation requests?

if you are, would you be able to translate ポルカドットエイリアン (Polka Dot Alien)? thank you!

Space Zinnia 17:42, July 10, 2019 (UTC)

thank you so much for the translation!

Space Zinnia 15:33, July 17, 2019 (UTC)

雲になったら
[//www.youtube.com/watch?v=d6ZwbJZu318 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d6ZwbJZu318]

[//vocaloid.fandom.com/wiki/User_blog_comment:Damesukekun/Song_Translating_and_Mistranslating/@comment-50.0.68.248-20190715090855/@comment-1523675-20190715141816?oldid=843846 https://vocaloid.fandom.com/wiki/User_blog_comment:Damesukekun/Song_Translating_and_Mistranslating/@comment-50.0.68.248-20190715090855/@comment-1523675-20190715141816?oldid=843846]

Damesukekun said something about "unreal conditional mood" and I have no idea what that means, but maybe you can make some adjustments if needed to the one he said was acceptable?

[//vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/%E9%9B%B2%E3%81%AB%E3%81%AA%E3%81%A3%E3%81%9F%E3%82%89_(Kumo_ni_Nattara)?veaction=edit https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/%E9%9B%B2%E3%81%AB%E3%81%AA%E3%81%A3%E3%81%9F%E3%82%89_(Kumo_ni_Nattara)?veaction=edit]

parasited
[//www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm35368484 https://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm35368484]

Watashi to Akachan Tsukuranai
私と赤ちゃん作らない？ (Watashi to Akachan Tsukuranai?) Does this need to be downgraded or is it still explicit?

鏡のメイデー
[//www.youtube.com/watch?v=tQCZkhIKi7E https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tQCZkhIKi7E]

melonade
[//youtu.be/ysLYVUYfP48 https://youtu.be/ysLYVUYfP48]

NO MORE REQUESTS FOR NOW
I'm sick again with a very bad cold so I won't be very active until I recover ... You can make requests if you don't mind me ignoring them lol. It's been a bad winter for coughs and colds down under ...

glory
[//youtu.be/4nXiWfk1OjI https://youtu.be/4nXiWfk1OjI]

Dreaming/Haakun
[//www.youtube.com/watch?v=GanfB2VF2kQ https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GanfB2VF2kQ]

Sawada
鶯谷の女 (Uguisudani no Onna) Does this need to be downgraded?


 * The lyrics don't contain anything explicit but the video contains what would be considered pornography in the West. That may even be why it's unavailable on YouTube. In that sort of case, we've been downgrading the rating and we put a warning about the video, but I think we should ask Amandelen's opinion as well. ElectricRaichu (talk) 02:41, July 21, 2019 (UTC)


 * It's probably better to be consistent in this case, since the lyrics aren't explicit. I'd downgrade it to questionable. Amandelen (talk) 19:40, July 21, 2019 (UTC)

ロンリーチルドレン
[//www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yd0eB4SqKn8 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yd0eB4SqKn8] (Been translated/made already so nvm :'D)

ym
未完成人間 (Mikansei Ningen) Should this rating be changed too?


 * There's nothing in the lyrics I could see. There a few minor issues in the video so I left a warning to that effect. ElectricRaichu (talk) 04:44, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

New Translation
Hi, I tried to add a translation to this page

君のいない世界には音も色もない (Kimi no Inai Sekai ni wa Oto mo Iro mo nai)

but I am only a starter on the lyric translation. ^ ^

When I actually tried to add them, the admin says it has to be checked by a native Japanese person, would you like to offer help?

Feel free to point out mistakes I've made

And if it's about the style of translation, feel free to comment or give suggestions.

I just leave it here for now (still a bit uncertain about several lines.

For some reason, we can never be molded into one existence
 * I've promptly noticed that

I wish I can be with you
 * Since I am so weak and fragile

Even if only for now, May I hold your hand tight?
 * The heat superimposed by you makes me feel the extra coldness

Please leave the world after me
 * Even if it is only for one second,

There is no sound or color left for me
 * In the world without you

But I don't care who it is
 * Wonder if anybody will laugh at me

Even though I know nothing beyond the things I already know Please still trust me I Don't know whether the sky is going to shine or rain, It's like a drawn curtain So without seeing anything, I grieved at the things that I concealed Open the window and it was too That I have to turn my eyes back
 * Because I believe one day I will think like that


 * And it is you who said, "It'll be fine."


 * I came to the world alone unable to find support


 * Though I shall long have understood the pain like this


 * But since you give acceptance and give me denial,


 * If my heart that was made from those words have any heaviness,


 * I want it to be double in size (?)

Please leave the world after me
 * Even if it is only for one second,

I can not even take a breathe
 * In the world without you


 * As the chances to get worried like this will not be much in remaining,


 * please tell me the things you deem important
 * I still remember that since the day that I was near your side in the seat by the window
 * I still remember that since the day that I was near your side in the seat by the window


 * I have always been thinking about you


 * I have always been thinking about you

Thanks for reviewing this.

MC Macron (talk) 15:58, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Defective
[//www.youtube.com/watch?v=ypQOMKLjD74 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ypQOMKLjD74]

MikotoP
[//www.youtube.com/watch?v=7BH8DFyg-Og&feature=youtu.be https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7BH8DFyg-Og&feature=youtu.be]  Reupload, idk if the lyrics are changed tho

Starting to feel better
I'm starting to feel better now so I'll try and slowly work on people's requests. Everyone around here's saying it's been an awful winter for colds that hang around for weeks ...

Spring/core
[//www.youtube.com/watch?v=N2YsSeFEukQ https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N2YsSeFEukQ]

Suicidal Girlfriend
[//vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/%E3%82%B9%E3%82%A4%E3%82%B5%E3%82%A4%E3%83%80%E3%83%AB%E3%83%BB%E3%82%AC%E3%83%BC%E3%83%AB%E3%83%95%E3%83%AC%E3%83%B3%E3%83%89_%28Suicidal_Girlfriend%29 https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/%E3%82%B9%E3%82%A4%E3%82%B5%E3%82%A4%E3%83%80%E3%83%AB%E3%83%BB%E3%82%AC%E3%83%BC%E3%83%AB%E3%83%95%E3%83%AC%E3%83%B3%E3%83%89_%28Suicidal_Girlfriend%29] Should this be downgraded?

Ikapoid
[//www.youtube.com/watch?v=nTe3IcklK9Q https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nTe3IcklK9Q]

singing onward
[//www.youtube.com/watch?v=SYNRP0emVpQ https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SYNRP0emVpQ]

Crucial Information
I have something really dear to ask you but please go to my talk page for more information if you have time. RandomAir BGM (talk) 18:16, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

Red Swamp
赤い沼の底 (Akai Numa no Soko) Shuld this be downgraded?

Check translation
Hey,

Could you check out this translation please? The video, and the page. Thanks so much!

NayruBlue (talk) 09:12, July 28, 2019 (UTC)


 * This as well please. The blog post and the page.


 * NayruBlue (talk) 09:55, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Re: Akai Numa no Soko
Thank you for translating that song! I agree with downgrading it, so I've changed it to questionable. Amandelen (talk) 20:48, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Hello there! Could you translate this beautiful song? I will very glad if you can devote your precious time and make! Thank you very much! (＾▽＾) [//vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/Artery/AVTechNO https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/Artery/AVTechNO]

22
Thanks~! Yeah, it sucks how Puryu seems to be deleting their songs for some reason. Be nice if some were on an album or so~Raine

Ame no MurakumoP
[//www.youtube.com/watch?v=fTh8yL6MLoc https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fTh8yL6MLoc]

noboruP
因数分解なら解けるのに (Insuu Bunkai nara Tokeru noni)

Edit: sorry, i meant it as a translation request ^^;~Angel

Huh, weird, it wasn't the last time I checked it didn't show any translation, thank you though! :)--Angel

Onomapet
オノマペット (Onomapet) Could you translate this when you have time?

Re: 常世の気まぐれ
Hey,

Sorry about that! The uploader was TheBlackCero and I didn't know their connection to Hazuki no Yume. I googled the name around and I don't know how I missed that. Sorry again.

NayruBlue (talk) 07:04, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Request
https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/ある計画は今も密かに_%28Aru_Keikaku_wa_Ima_mo_Hisoka_ni%29 (Surprised more of the mirai entries don't have translations yet, much less the winner(s))

Onion request
[//www.youtube.com/watch?v=7rUakfZ1jCo&feature=youtu.be https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7rUakfZ1jCo&feature=youtu.be]

Edit: https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/%E7%8E%89%E8%91%B1_%28Tamanegi%29 seems to be the same song

JUMP FOR JOY
Yeah, already know 今夜くらい我を忘れて that mean "let's ourselves go, just for tonight" just I get confuse between "ourselves" and "us" and I decide to put "us" because it's sound better. But it's okay, I will follow your correction. And I see, and please correct me and thank you so much, sensei.

AnnmeltsP
https://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm35423520 AnnMeltsP made a new song :3

Lady
https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/レディインザシンギングルウム_(Lady_in_the_Singing_Room) Could you check over this rating?

Corruption
https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/Corruption Should this be downgraded?

Hello, I think downgrading is fine. I also think we should maybe replace the image with Miku's boxart or something similar since it's very NSFW. What do you think? Amandelen (talk) 13:52, August 6, 2019 (UTC)

Guren
https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/%E7%B4%85%E8%93%AE%E7%99%BE%E9%AC%BC%E5%A4%9C%E8%A1%8C_(Guren_Hyakkiyakou) should this be downgraded?

Fallen Angel request
https://youtu.be/DNEIC_pVeFE

Re: Sir Vocalord
Hello,

I think the Sir Vocalord category was just buffering the pages still. That sometimes happens. They show up for me now, at least. As for the bandcamp links, they've always been put in the external links section up until now, but you're right that it makes more sense to put them in the infobox. I'll start doing that for the ones I come across. Amandelen (talk) 09:37, August 7, 2019 (UTC)

Gomenne Gomenne
Hey,

I've been wondering for a while if we should remove the lyrics to Gomenne Gomenne since they're very explicit. I personally think we should remove them or at least heavily censor them because I'm pretty sure they're going to be removed by fandom otherwise, but since it's such a popular page (especially these last few days) I was wondering what you thought about it. Amandelen (talk) 09:37, August 7, 2019 (UTC)

Left some translation requests
Hi! Here for a reminder that I left some HoneyWorks translation requests on my talk page. Please do them whenever there's time. RandomAir BGM (talk) 13:45, August 7, 2019 (UTC)

HobonichiP
韓国の皆さん 死んでください (Kankoku no Minasan Shinde Kudasai) Should this be downgraded? (i think hobonichiP has some other 'explicit' related songs too but i don't remember)


 * I think so, but I've asked Damesukekun on Vocaloid Wiki for his opinion as it might be culturally sensitive. ElectricRaichu (talk) 22:30, August 8, 2019 (UTC)
 * Damesukekun recommends we should mark it questionable so I've done that. ElectricRaichu (talk) 22:31, August 13, 2019 (UTC)

Rondon slag party
ロンドンスラッグパーティハイ (Rondon Slag Party Hi) Should this be downgraded?

Re: Soap Lagoon
Hello,

RainySkye asked me if we should censor Soap Lagoon, but I don't think that's possible with how often the song is explicit. I'm planning on removing the lyrics, but I wanted to see what you thought about it first.

I also saw RainySkye asked you if we should downgrade Rondon Slag Party Hi. I personally think that's a good idea, just throwing that out there =).

I hope you have a nice day! Amandelen (talk) 09:34, August 9, 2019 (UTC)


 * I downgraded Rondon Slag Party Hi. ElectricRaichu (talk) 04:35, August 10, 2019 (UTC)

Ai no heiki
愛の兵器 (Ai no Heiki) i think the rormaji's off for the very last line?

Any info?
Hello sir, can I know the status of my lyric translation of "Jump for joy"? Sorry if I become such burden to you sir.

RE: I want to says thank you and sorry so much to bother you.

はい、わかりました. 恐れ入ります! m(_ _)m

Re: KEEP×OUT！
Downgrading seems fine to me. 2bricacity is the translator, but I forgot to credit them for some reason. It should be fixed now, though. Amandelen (talk) 19:55, August 13, 2019 (UTC)

Kimi wa Dekinai Ko
君はできない子 (Kimi wa Dekinai Ko) Should this be downgraded?


 * I don't think so. ElectricRaichu (talk) 04:54, August 14, 2019 (UTC)

takecoke
にゃんタイムきゅんデレラヴァー (Nyan Time Kyun Dere Lover) Should this be downgraded?


 * Probably not, since the video contains an actual sex scene even though it's blacked out, plus though I don't understand all the lyrics, they seem pretty racy. ElectricRaichu (talk) 23:25, August 15, 2019 (UTC)

想像上のバイドゥベーダー
想像上のバイドゥベーダー (Souzoujou no Bide Vader) Can you look over this?

Thank you
焼き付けて = "into our memories', oh I see, is not baking or printing that related to heat thing. Yes I satisfied with the translation. It really sound American English to me. Yes I really understand and thank you. You can publish the translation, sir and thank you again.

ありがとうございます! ｡(*^▽^*)ゞ

victream request
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bjoDsgmoBQ8

Good morning
Good-Morning! Should this be downgraded?

Psychogram
Psychogram

For the "I don't want to give it." Would it make more sense for it to be "give it up/out/away" in the context of the line?


 * Could you explain how you understand the context? It usually means "I don't want to hand [something] over [to someone]", but "give it away" might also be OK depending on context. Do you know what she's talking about? ElectricRaichu (talk) 03:52, August 17, 2019 (UTC)

The line before is just "I love you", so I beleive she's talking about the boy herself since it seems like basically kidnapped(?) him and then stabbed him in the end (I also found it odd that one of the lyrics says "Bind ME tightly" when he's the one being a prisoner unless it's an emotional bond or 'embrace' instead)

~Raine


 * The translation in the YouTube video description attributed to 1-mini-1 has "You’re too wonderful, I don’t want to hand you over". If she's talking about him, then that would be a better translation. Maybe she kidnapped him and doesn't want to give him back. Anyway, I'll switch the translation to attributed to 1-mini-1's. I think it has fewer problems than the one here now. attributed to KuroiAsa, which has some weird lines. Like I can't see how chikutto suru means "see you tomorrow", or how bibitto kuru means "be vivid". ElectricRaichu (talk) 04:36, August 18, 2019 (UTC)

According to damesuke, 1-mini-1 is 'unrecommended'~Raine


 * Well that particular translation is better than KuoiAsa's, which had so many obvious mistakes people were leaving comments about it! Maybe we can ask Damesukekun to check it just in case. ElectricRaichu (talk) 23:19, August 18, 2019 (UTC)

Soluro (Request)
https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/%E3%82%BD%E3%83%AB%E3%83%BC%E3%83%AD_%28Soluro%29

Noraneko
https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/%E3%83%8E%E3%83%A9%E3%83%8D%E3%82%B3_%28Nora_Neko%29 Can you help with one part? it wasn't in the Miku wiki, but Luka does say the 'fura fura' part and on screen too

UtataP
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fYZsYgFKiWs

Sano Kanome
https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/%E3%81%8A%E3%82%84%E3%81%99%E3%81%BF_%28Oyasumi%29/Sano_Kamome Can you look over this? No translator was credited


 * I think it must have been one of my early efforts. I made a few corrections. Thanks for letting me know. ElectricRaichu (talk) 04:59, August 24, 2019 (UTC)

Bandcamp Broadcasts
I apologize for bothering you, but is there some way to see the viewcount on Bandcamp broadcasts for the infobox, or is it fine to leave it out in that case? MeaningfulUsername (talk) 00:34, August 25, 2019 (UTC)


 * Thank you for letting me know! MeaningfulUsername (talk) 10:34, August 25, 2019 (UTC)

Nonuse
NON-USE

Does this need a warning? Might be a bit of implied depression but i believe the last line about taking off shoes is a Japanese...well, I don't wanna say "custom"/know of a better word that people do before they committ suicide


 * TBH I'm not sure. It seems borderline, like the lyrics are consistent with suicide but they don't seem disturbing, so I don't mind either way. ElectricRaichu (talk) 05:47, August 25, 2019 (UTC)

Daisuke (request)
https://piapro.jp/t/OMp_

https://soundcloud.com/katachi-p/boku

jay (request)
Yuki no Hana winter


 * I translated the Japanese lyrics. ElectricRaichu (talk) 06:24, August 26, 2019 (UTC)

MikitoP (request)
https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/%E9%9C%8A%E3%80%85%E9%9F%B3%E9%A0%AD%E3%81%A7%E3%81%BE%E3%81%9F%E6%9D%A5%E4%B8%96_%28Reirei_Ondo_de_Mata_Raise%29

lalalove
LaLaL危 (LaLaLabu) Can you change the yellow to a slightly darker shade so it's easier to read?


 * Do you mean the yellow lyrics? I made them darker. ElectricRaichu (talk) 04:15, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

Trans Request
Shounen Tragedy

nakazawa naka request
https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/%E3%81%82%E3%81%AE%E5%A4%8F%E3%80%81%E5%90%9B%E3%81%A8%E8%A6%8B%E3%81%9F%E6%89%93%E3%81%A1%E4%B8%8A%E3%81%92%E8%8A%B1%E7%81%AB%E3%81%AF_%28Ano_Natsu%2C_Kimi_to_Mita_Uchiagehanabi_wa%29

Moonbow request
https://youtu.be/xUnz38cei2Y

Re: New Series
Hello,

I've added a small explanation in the "Categorizing" section. Thank you for the suggestion!

I think adding さうすのらくがき as a category should be fine. I'd either call it "South no Rakugaki" or "South's Scribbles" as you suggested. Have a nice day =) Amandelen (talk) 09:49, August 28, 2019 (UTC)

Saga
『 性 』 ("Saga") Does this need to be downgraded?


 * I agree, I changed the warning. ElectricRaichu (talk) 07:24, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

reply
Maybe you could discuss it with Vaffisuco too? Weren't they getting back into active translating again? I haven't heard those intial terms before, IDK if they have time to reply but maybe you could tweet at doriko directly for clairification, even if you can't get a full answer on "what is this song about" or so~Raine

Hm, miku's in a classroom, so maybe it's the musical scale (EDBDF, FACE) Or just a random equation like ? = X (tho i suppose they would've just used 'X' in that case) is there anything on the YT or NND comments that might clarify/ask about what the intiials mean?

Shosho
https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/初音ミクの妄想_(Hatsune_Miku_no_Mousou)

Should this be downgraded?


 * Definitely not. ElectricRaichu (talk) 06:31, August 30, 2019 (UTC)

mie request
夕陽ケ丘に咲いた花は (Yuuhigaoka ni Saita Hana wa)

8.32
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ig-a4aJR3jM Could you check over this to see if the acoustic version has any lyrical differences? (I don't think *Luna's usually does, but  i know sometimes acoustic/piano/alternate versions of songs can have minor differences)~Raine


 * We had a couple of errors in the lyrics but both versions seem to be identical. ElectricRaichu (talk) 22:38, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Nounai zekkyou
Can you look at this? I was listening to it and it sounds like something other than "kanata"


 * There were several errors that I could find but the vocals were too fast and unclear so I don't know if I fixed everything. ElectricRaichu (talk) 08:36, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

Len request
https://youtu.be/zH-_Ns3lZdY

グランドキャバレー/masa request
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lOEILNZc-5E

I'm bad at interpreting stuff too lol. It references the humpty dumpty story but idk if that has any particular importance/big impact on the song overall. Len seems to be singing to another person about life? ~Raine

Mafumafu request
ジグソーパズル (Jigsaw Puzzle)

Shius request
ゆめにおちる (Yume ni Ochiru)

nonemu request
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QX_zj6gmcHI

Sure, I can take a listen.

tho at first glance, "bakenokawa" doesn't need to be separated? I know "bake" is its own noun for like ghost/spirit right? So does it need to be bake no kawa or does it always get grouped together when it's not like a proper noun like "Boku no..."


 * Good point. I looked it up and it seems to be one word. ElectricRaichu (talk) 05:11, September 13, 2019 (UTC)

Memeshii request
めめしいね (Memeshii ne) I don't think i've seen too many miki songs translated lately lol

Kirin
AO～いつだってすぐ側に～ (AO ~Itsu Datte Sugu Soba ni~) The song box links to the disambiguation rather than the main composer

Telecaster B-Boy (Suriii)
Hello! I hope you're having a good day. My request is Telecaster B-Boy. Thank you SolarTwT (talk) 21:15, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

Yeah i think it should help, be nice to have a shortcut saved but suppose there's only so much coding you can do, thanks~Angel

そこに命はありますか. (Soko ni Inochi wa Arimasu ka.) Also, can you check through this? Damesuke said it was 'neutral' and some 'misreadings', so wouldn't it be good to update/polish/tweak translations like this as much as possible? (esp for the less straightfoward/metaphorical songs, since those meanings/interpretations can be complex too)

6-7-5-1
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JQlxWRKbH1A Could you make a page for this when you have time?

Vale
https://youtu.be/wVfzrUPIZ7o New WanOpo song!

Ai ni Deai Koi wa Tsudzuku
Hey. If you're up to date with HoneyWorks, and you've seen my playlist, then you must know this song perfectly. I heard the Kotoha version, and I liked her voice, but I still preferred Sphere's original version. Well, the old me loves this song so much that he decided to have a go at translating it. Besides, the lyrics are simple. Stick around, because I'll have it up for you to check this weekend.

By the way, are you listening to any other HoneyWorks songs in my playlist? RandomAir BGM (talk) 01:10, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

"Let Us!" request
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XTyBL83N70k nice to see some group songs :3--Angel


 * This is a song from 2016 on Niconico. The mp3 is available on piapro. I've been wanting to get around to it for over a year ... hopefully one of these days. ElectricRaichu (talk) 06:54, September 19, 2019 (UTC)
 * Actually the mp3 is not on piapro, I was confusing it with season. ElectricRaichu (talk) 06:56, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

アドレナリンダンス
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Tp8nUEU57VM New 3/Surri song (epilepsy warning)

Telecaster B-boy Translation
Thank you so so much for the translation!!! Have a good day!

Oh, there are a few translations I would like you to check. I'll be linking them here:- Thank you once again!!!
 * Underground to Chiseigyo
 * Phorograph
 * Non-mellow

SolarTwT (talk) 05:34, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

@Solar: They should be fine, Vervain Subs/Tosiaki is on damesukekun's list~Raine

I did a few spot checks of random lines and the translations seem reasonable. If damesukekun says the translators know what they're doing, then I think they should be OK. ElectricRaichu (talk) 00:34, September 21, 2019 (UTC)

Thank you! I just wanted to double check since Tosiaki made changes to some of the lines, especially for Underground to Chiseigyo. SolarTwT (talk) 12:56, September 21, 2019 (UTC)

Connection
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QU8T1Ao7Bd8

ディアフレンド
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qmWghxlAJJU

Pandora
パンドラおもちゃ箱 (Pandora Omochabako) Would this not count as a 'cover' song? Toa's comment on NND says something like "i was allowed to make a miku version"


 * Much like HoneyWorks' songs, the two versions were uploaded around the same time. Toa has also worked on the original, so it seems to be more of a collaboration than a cover to me. Amandelen (talk) 21:12, September 21, 2019 (UTC)

Toa's comments says "I was allowed to do the tuning for a/the Miku version", so I think Amandelen is right. ElectricRaichu (talk) 03:15, September 22, 2019 (UTC)

リア充革命／山桜P
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zT3O4-eUy6I

Re: ユメミーガール
Hey,

That's a hard one. I personally prefer ユメミーガール (Yume Me Girl) because it looks better to me, but I don't think one is necessarily more correct than the other when looking at the rules. Puns are always hard to deal with in translations orz. Sorry I can't be of more help. Amandelen (talk) 09:34, September 23, 2019 (UTC)

奶z0
Hello, will the romaji for 奶z0 be "Naizo" ? SolarTwT (talk) 08:10, September 24, 2019 (UTC)

I see. I thought, since the word 「臓器」appears in the conversation towards the end, 奶z0 would be Naiz0 like 「内臓」but stylized. It seems a bit far-fetched though... Thanks for the changes!

SolarTwT (talk) 07:21, September 25, 2019 (UTC)

Great! Thank you TvT SolarTwT (talk) 08:25, September 25, 2019 (UTC)

Divela reply
Thanks, and wow, the song itself is fine, but i just realized, maybe the page needs a questionable content b/c miku's basically impaled in that thumbnail? even if it's stylized to look more 'beautiful' than graphic lol--Angel


 * I removed the picture just in case and let Amandelen know, but she thinks it's not bad enough to worry about so she restored it. I think we'll leave it like that unless anyone lets us know that they find it distressing. ElectricRaichu (talk) 10:10, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

Re: Soko ni Inochi wa Arimasu ka. picture
The image is of an impaled doll that resembles Miku. As there is no blood and no actual bodily harm I don't see a need to remove it. I undid your edit, but feel free to redo it if you disagree with me. Amandelen (talk) 09:29, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

mayuko
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YfDtxiaTLOA

Planetarium no Shinjitsu
Hi, just wanted to ask something about the translation of this song below. Damesukekun checked them and said there were grammatical and wording errors, but I wanted to know if the translation is completely unusable, or can be improved with a few tweaks.

''Even if you had the whole world in your hands You'd get bored with it soon enough That's why I hide myself from you''

The master key concealed in the pocket I made sure that it was still there again and again Like I was holding a ticket for two made of stars

Old rows of houses, a faded STOP sign You know, I wouldn't mind living here But only if you were with me

Our future projected on a planetarium Temporary galaxies and feelings Let's sing with the constellations of the 2 AM sky tonight We don't need a reason A life with you and me in it Those are the days I want to keep picturing in my mind Every minute, every second

The scenery I see from the passenger's seat May be different from the one you see in your mirror Just believe in the warmth we feel from each other's fingertips

I was in the shade, looking out at the sunny side of the street The one who reached out to me was you Nobody else but you

Our future projected on a planetarium Temporary galaxies and feelings Let's sing with the constellations of the 2 AM sky tonight We don't need a reason A life with you and me in it Those are the days I want to keep picturing in my mind Every minute, every second

When the prelude starts to play We blow out the candle over and over I want to be the star that shines on your street at night Hiding your sadness deep inside You spun those words of love for me Now I want to make it up to you with everything I have

Our future projected on a planetarium Temporary galaxies and feelings Let's sing with the constellations of the 2 AM sky tonight I won't let anyone say that this isn't real A life with you and me in it Those are the days I want to keep picturing in my mind Every minute, every second

On that day I saw The truth on a planetarium

There's a translation in the CC as well, just in case you want to check that too.

Thank you!!

SolarTwT (talk) 08:16, September 30, 2019 (UTC)

Removing NSFW lyrics
Hey,

I've just gotten a list from Tokina with pages deleted from VLW which had NSFW lyrics:

Gay Sex 超強烈快感嗡嗡嗡震動 (Chāo Qiángliè Kuàigǎn Wēngwēngwēng Zhèndòng) 淑女ベリィの作り方. (Shukujo Berry no Tsukurikata.) 赤と白と黒の系譜 (Aka to Shiro to Kuro no Keifu) ヴェノマニア公の狂気 (Venomania-kou no Kyouki) 標本少女 (Hyouhon Shoujo) Secrets of Wysteria Halloween Candy Funky Husky Cool Girls Broken child 警察蜀黍!!! 就是这个人!!! (Jǐngchá Shǔshǔ!!! Jiùshì Zhège Rén!!!) 叶公好龙 (Yègōnghàolóng) 援交ラプンツェル (Enkou Rapunzel)

I've also gotten a list with songs which had their lyrics removed. I've already removed some lyrics from pages which were on that list, and I'll get to the rest at a later time. I have to get to work now, but I'll send you a follow-up message about this later. Amandelen (talk) 09:23, September 30, 2019 (UTC)

I've removed the lyrics of the songs you mentioned. Some thoughts on the others:
 * I agree with your first point ("One reason... is extreme."). They probably removed the lyrics to make absolutely sure that they're complying with fandom's TOU. I'm not sure if we should do the same, since as you said the singer of the song and the narrator are not always the same person.


 * 叶公好龙 (Yègōnghàolóng): Moke it quite clearly drawn as a minor. The lyrics don't seem to be that sexual at first glance, but it is very much implied. I think due to that and the TOU's prohibition of describing non-consensual sex it was removed I think.
 * 赤と白と黒の系譜 (Aka to Shiro to Kuro no Keifu): This song loosely describes rape (I wrapped my cold fingers... The "white" that you gave me that day). It was likely removed for the same reason as 叶公好龙 (Yègōnghàolóng).
 * ヴェノマニア公の狂気 (Venomania-kou no Kyouki): Technically the described acts are non-consensual since the women were under Venomania's spell. I guess that's why it was removed?
 * Secrets of Wysteria: This song is about Albert Fish (honestly I suggest not reading the wikipedia article that I linked; it is very disturbing). He was a serial killer and child rapist. I think it has been removed due to that.
 * Amandelen (talk) 13:16, September 30, 2019 (UTC)


 * Hello (again),


 * Gave Amandelen the right reasons for the 4 pages. Technically she got right for the 2 first and the last one. For Venomania, it's also because... You remember who was in the victims? An animal and a little child. So pedophilia, so unacceptable for Fandom. After to be honest we know the song is extremely known and that the deletion is being under debate, but actually... The other article which pushed this deletion is this one.


 * For Secrets of Wysteria it's also because... It's Oliver who sings this, and since he is underaged... :/ We would have serious issues. :( Tokina8937 (talk) 14:35, September 30, 2019 (UTC)

The TOU only prohibits "...any content that is obscene, pornographic, abusive, offensive, profane, or otherwise violates any law or right of any third party, or content that contains homophobia, ethnic slurs, religious intolerance, or encourages criminal conduct;". But the Fandom Guidelines says "For text, content that just mentions characters have sex is likely to be OK. But content that describes exactly how they have sex, is not. Content that describes violent or non-consensual sex is expressly prohibited.". I think it's a bit vague since they aren't really clear what they mean with describing. Does mentioning something or alluding to it (like 赤と白と黒の系譜 (Aka to Shiro to Kuro no Keifu)) describe non-consensual sex? Or should it be described more clearly than that? I agree that mentioning rape automatically being a violation seems a bit extreme, especially since Game of Thrones wiki exists, which even has an article on rape. It seems to me that the best way to go about it would be to remove lyrics if they detail rape any further than mentioning that it happened or alluding to it (or when the lyrics glorify it, obviously). So basically I agree with what you proposed. Amandelen (talk) 15:22, October 1, 2019 (UTC)

hinayuki
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OK-ybp0qRl0

LamazeP
我こそ昆布大使館 (Ware koso Konbu Taishikan)

Could you do the romaji for this? I found the lyrics on a blog post linked directly on LamazeP's NND upload so i assume he's the owner of the blog or so~Raine


 * Looks like Solar did it. I tried but my edit got lost since my internet has been up and down a lot. ElectricRaichu (talk) 02:45, October 4, 2019 (UTC)

Himitsukitchi
Watashi wa Himitsukichi Does this need to be downgraded or censored?

Thanks, nice to see more wholesome songs ( i mean, i like 'gritty' songs too but nice to have a break as well haha.)


 * It has enough violence and bad language that I don't think we should downgrade it. ElectricRaichu (talk) 04:49, October 7, 2019 (UTC)

Explicit Lyrics and such
Hey,

I've worked though all the pages that still needed action. There were four songs that were borderline that I saved for last, and I wanted to inform you on what I did with those:
 * I transferred the lyrics from VAPOR CANNON and リボルバー (Revolver), since it's pretty clear what is happening and not up to interpretation (at least to me).
 * I removed the part in Hot Milk where sex was described. I feel that the other parts do not describe anything as explicitly as the parts I removed, so that's why I only removed that part.
 * I didn't do anything to 炎の娘 (Honoo no Musume), since the sexual parts are dressed up in metaphors and it's not that apparent what's going on like in VAPOR CANNON.

Feel free to undo any edits I made if you disagree. I'm not entirely sure about some of them myself, but I figured it's better to be save then sorry when dealing with these last four ones. Amandelen (talk) 12:18, October 7, 2019 (UTC)


 * Oops I'd kind of forgotten about Secrets of Wysteria. I personally think the lyrics are vague enough to stay, but I did remove them just to be sure (as the removal can always be undone). We should definitely remove the link to the Wikipedia article, though. I've removed the whole mention of Fish to prevent people from easily looking it up. Amandelen (talk) 10:23, October 8, 2019 (UTC)
 * Also, get well soon! Amandelen (talk) 10:24, October 8, 2019 (UTC)

Gunjou Breath
群青ブレス (Gunjou Breath) Can you check the accuracy of the description/author's comment? (And maybe some of Kzzoldyck's other contributions too)


 * The comment was translated accurately, although the original has since been deleted. ElectricRaichu (talk) 22:21, October 12, 2019 (UTC)

Nonfiction girl
シン・ノンフィクションガール (Shin Non-Fiction Girl)

Can you translate this when you have time? I don't think ppl translate rerulili's songs as much anymore--Angel

Reflamer
Thanks, it's also on the CC now, it just needs approval

https://www.youtube.com/timedtext_editor?action_mde_edit_form=1&v=QX_zj6gmcHI&lang=en&bl=watch&ui=hd&ref=wt&forceedit=captions&tab=captions&o=U&ar=1570917064030