User blog comment:Amandelen/Translations that need to be checked/@comment-26361605-20200207143908

I tried to make some edits to Nyanmoku no Ryoukai's translation to make it flow better. I'd like to have them checked for accuracy and also I'd like some help with lines I'm not too sure about. 1) "A foul tasting formula applied to daily life" sounds like it should be related in some way to the previous sentence. Even just adding an "It's" at the start so it can have a proper verb instanly makes it seem related, imo 2) Am I wrong in thinking that it's probably "receive rewards OR get punishment" rather than an? 3) "The blame of speaking frankly has become taboo and people deceive themselves about it", I'm getting something like "Speaking frankly became taboo and that has caused people to deceive themselves" but I'm not sure. 4) "If this is burnt delicious" doesn't make much sense. Relatedly, I'm not sure what the repeated "datta kedo" is supposed to be emphasizing. If it's related to the previous sentence it's probably something like "B-b-but we were friends!", but the PV makes me think it relates to the next one and is more like "Well, yes, we were friends but you're looking so tasty right now...".

All that aside, could you check Yu Puffin's Justin Jive Justify translation? There's somebody else credited in the video as the subber but as far as I can tell they just corrected one sentence ("All in all, a good Just In" into "I'm the inimitable Justin")