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Check translation
Hey,

Could you check out this translation please? The video, and the page. Thanks so much!

NayruBlue (talk) 09:12, July 28, 2019 (UTC)


 * This as well please. The blog post and the page.


 * NayruBlue (talk) 09:55, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Re: Akai Numa no Soko
Thank you for translating that song! I agree with downgrading it, so I've changed it to questionable. Amandelen (talk) 20:48, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Hello there! Could you translate this beautiful song? I will very glad if you can devote your precious time and make! Thank you very much! (＾▽＾) [//vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/Artery/AVTechNO https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/Artery/AVTechNO]

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Thanks~! Yeah, it sucks how Puryu seems to be deleting their songs for some reason. Be nice if some were on an album or so~Raine

Ame no MurakumoP
[//www.youtube.com/watch?v=fTh8yL6MLoc https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fTh8yL6MLoc]

noboruP
因数分解なら解けるのに (Insuu Bunkai nara Tokeru noni)

Edit: sorry, i meant it as a translation request ^^;~Angel

Huh, weird, it wasn't the last time I checked it didn't show any translation, thank you though! :)--Angel

Onomapet
オノマペット (Onomapet) Could you translate this when you have time?

Re: 常世の気まぐれ
Hey,

Sorry about that! The uploader was TheBlackCero and I didn't know their connection to Hazuki no Yume. I googled the name around and I don't know how I missed that. Sorry again.

NayruBlue (talk) 07:04, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Request
https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/ある計画は今も密かに_%28Aru_Keikaku_wa_Ima_mo_Hisoka_ni%29 (Surprised more of the mirai entries don't have translations yet, much less the winner(s))

Onion request
[//www.youtube.com/watch?v=7rUakfZ1jCo&feature=youtu.be https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7rUakfZ1jCo&feature=youtu.be]

Edit: https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/%E7%8E%89%E8%91%B1_%28Tamanegi%29 seems to be the same song

JUMP FOR JOY
Yeah, already know 今夜くらい我を忘れて that mean "let's ourselves go, just for tonight" just I get confuse between "ourselves" and "us" and I decide to put "us" because it's sound better. But it's okay, I will follow your correction. And I see, and please correct me and thank you so much, sensei.

AnnmeltsP
https://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm35423520 AnnMeltsP made a new song :3

Lady
https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/レディインザシンギングルウム_(Lady_in_the_Singing_Room) Could you check over this rating?

Corruption
https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/Corruption Should this be downgraded?

Hello, I think downgrading is fine. I also think we should maybe replace the image with Miku's boxart or something similar since it's very NSFW. What do you think? Amandelen (talk) 13:52, August 6, 2019 (UTC)

Guren
https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/%E7%B4%85%E8%93%AE%E7%99%BE%E9%AC%BC%E5%A4%9C%E8%A1%8C_(Guren_Hyakkiyakou) should this be downgraded?

Fallen Angel request
https://youtu.be/DNEIC_pVeFE

Re: Sir Vocalord
Hello,

I think the Sir Vocalord category was just buffering the pages still. That sometimes happens. They show up for me now, at least. As for the bandcamp links, they've always been put in the external links section up until now, but you're right that it makes more sense to put them in the infobox. I'll start doing that for the ones I come across. Amandelen (talk) 09:37, August 7, 2019 (UTC)

Gomenne Gomenne
Hey,

I've been wondering for a while if we should remove the lyrics to Gomenne Gomenne since they're very explicit. I personally think we should remove them or at least heavily censor them because I'm pretty sure they're going to be removed by fandom otherwise, but since it's such a popular page (especially these last few days) I was wondering what you thought about it. Amandelen (talk) 09:37, August 7, 2019 (UTC)

Left some translation requests
Hi! Here for a reminder that I left some HoneyWorks translation requests on my talk page. Please do them whenever there's time. RandomAir BGM (talk) 13:45, August 7, 2019 (UTC)

HobonichiP
韓国の皆さん 死んでください (Kankoku no Minasan Shinde Kudasai) Should this be downgraded? (i think hobonichiP has some other 'explicit' related songs too but i don't remember)


 * I think so, but I've asked Damesukekun on Vocaloid Wiki for his opinion as it might be culturally sensitive. ElectricRaichu (talk) 22:30, August 8, 2019 (UTC)
 * Damesukekun recommends we should mark it questionable so I've done that. ElectricRaichu (talk) 22:31, August 13, 2019 (UTC)

Rondon slag party
ロンドンスラッグパーティハイ (Rondon Slag Party Hi) Should this be downgraded?

Re: Soap Lagoon
Hello,

RainySkye asked me if we should censor Soap Lagoon, but I don't think that's possible with how often the song is explicit. I'm planning on removing the lyrics, but I wanted to see what you thought about it first.

I also saw RainySkye asked you if we should downgrade Rondon Slag Party Hi. I personally think that's a good idea, just throwing that out there =).

I hope you have a nice day! Amandelen (talk) 09:34, August 9, 2019 (UTC)


 * I downgraded Rondon Slag Party Hi. ElectricRaichu (talk) 04:35, August 10, 2019 (UTC)

Ai no heiki
愛の兵器 (Ai no Heiki) i think the rormaji's off for the very last line?

Any info?
Hello sir, can I know the status of my lyric translation of "Jump for joy"? Sorry if I become such burden to you sir.

RE: I want to says thank you and sorry so much to bother you.

はい、わかりました. 恐れ入ります! m(_ _)m

Re: KEEP×OUT！
Downgrading seems fine to me. 2bricacity is the translator, but I forgot to credit them for some reason. It should be fixed now, though. Amandelen (talk) 19:55, August 13, 2019 (UTC)

Kimi wa Dekinai Ko
君はできない子 (Kimi wa Dekinai Ko) Should this be downgraded?


 * I don't think so. ElectricRaichu (talk) 04:54, August 14, 2019 (UTC)

takecoke
にゃんタイムきゅんデレラヴァー (Nyan Time Kyun Dere Lover) Should this be downgraded?


 * Probably not, since the video contains an actual sex scene even though it's blacked out, plus though I don't understand all the lyrics, they seem pretty racy. ElectricRaichu (talk) 23:25, August 15, 2019 (UTC)

想像上のバイドゥベーダー
想像上のバイドゥベーダー (Souzoujou no Bide Vader) Can you look over this?

Thank you
焼き付けて = "into our memories', oh I see, is not baking or printing that related to heat thing. Yes I satisfied with the translation. It really sound American English to me. Yes I really understand and thank you. You can publish the translation, sir and thank you again.

ありがとうございます! ｡(*^▽^*)ゞ

victream request
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bjoDsgmoBQ8

Good morning
Good-Morning! Should this be downgraded?

Psychogram
Psychogram

For the "I don't want to give it." Would it make more sense for it to be "give it up/out/away" in the context of the line?


 * Could you explain how you understand the context? It usually means "I don't want to hand [something] over [to someone]", but "give it away" might also be OK depending on context. Do you know what she's talking about? ElectricRaichu (talk) 03:52, August 17, 2019 (UTC)

The line before is just "I love you", so I beleive she's talking about the boy herself since it seems like basically kidnapped(?) him and then stabbed him in the end (I also found it odd that one of the lyrics says "Bind ME tightly" when he's the one being a prisoner unless it's an emotional bond or 'embrace' instead)

~Raine


 * The translation in the YouTube video description attributed to 1-mini-1 has "You’re too wonderful, I don’t want to hand you over". If she's talking about him, then that would be a better translation. Maybe she kidnapped him and doesn't want to give him back. Anyway, I'll switch the translation to attributed to 1-mini-1's. I think it has fewer problems than the one here now. attributed to KuroiAsa, which has some weird lines. Like I can't see how chikutto suru means "see you tomorrow", or how bibitto kuru means "be vivid". ElectricRaichu (talk) 04:36, August 18, 2019 (UTC)

According to damesuke, 1-mini-1 is 'unrecommended'~Raine


 * Well that particular translation is better than KuoiAsa's, which had so many obvious mistakes people were leaving comments about it! Maybe we can ask Damesukekun to check it just in case. ElectricRaichu (talk) 23:19, August 18, 2019 (UTC)

Soluro (Request)
https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/%E3%82%BD%E3%83%AB%E3%83%BC%E3%83%AD_%28Soluro%29

Noraneko
https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/%E3%83%8E%E3%83%A9%E3%83%8D%E3%82%B3_%28Nora_Neko%29 Can you help with one part? it wasn't in the Miku wiki, but Luka does say the 'fura fura' part and on screen too

UtataP
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fYZsYgFKiWs

Sano Kanome
https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/%E3%81%8A%E3%82%84%E3%81%99%E3%81%BF_%28Oyasumi%29/Sano_Kamome Can you look over this? No translator was credited


 * I think it must have been one of my early efforts. I made a few corrections. Thanks for letting me know. ElectricRaichu (talk) 04:59, August 24, 2019 (UTC)

Bandcamp Broadcasts
I apologize for bothering you, but is there some way to see the viewcount on Bandcamp broadcasts for the infobox, or is it fine to leave it out in that case? MeaningfulUsername (talk) 00:34, August 25, 2019 (UTC)


 * Thank you for letting me know! MeaningfulUsername (talk) 10:34, August 25, 2019 (UTC)

Nonuse
NON-USE

Does this need a warning? Might be a bit of implied depression but i believe the last line about taking off shoes is a Japanese...well, I don't wanna say "custom"/know of a better word that people do before they committ suicide


 * TBH I'm not sure. It seems borderline, like the lyrics are consistent with suicide but they don't seem disturbing, so I don't mind either way. ElectricRaichu (talk) 05:47, August 25, 2019 (UTC)

Daisuke (request)
https://piapro.jp/t/OMp_

https://soundcloud.com/katachi-p/boku

jay (request)
Yuki no Hana winter


 * I translated the Japanese lyrics. ElectricRaichu (talk) 06:24, August 26, 2019 (UTC)

MikitoP (request)
https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/%E9%9C%8A%E3%80%85%E9%9F%B3%E9%A0%AD%E3%81%A7%E3%81%BE%E3%81%9F%E6%9D%A5%E4%B8%96_%28Reirei_Ondo_de_Mata_Raise%29

lalalove
LaLaL危 (LaLaLabu) Can you change the yellow to a slightly darker shade so it's easier to read?


 * Do you mean the yellow lyrics? I made them darker. ElectricRaichu (talk) 04:15, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

Trans Request
Shounen Tragedy

nakazawa naka request
https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/%E3%81%82%E3%81%AE%E5%A4%8F%E3%80%81%E5%90%9B%E3%81%A8%E8%A6%8B%E3%81%9F%E6%89%93%E3%81%A1%E4%B8%8A%E3%81%92%E8%8A%B1%E7%81%AB%E3%81%AF_%28Ano_Natsu%2C_Kimi_to_Mita_Uchiagehanabi_wa%29

Moonbow request
https://youtu.be/xUnz38cei2Y

Re: New Series
Hello,

I've added a small explanation in the "Categorizing" section. Thank you for the suggestion!

I think adding さうすのらくがき as a category should be fine. I'd either call it "South no Rakugaki" or "South's Scribbles" as you suggested. Have a nice day =) Amandelen (talk) 09:49, August 28, 2019 (UTC)

Saga
『 性 』 ("Saga") Does this need to be downgraded?


 * I agree, I changed the warning. ElectricRaichu (talk) 07:24, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

reply
Maybe you could discuss it with Vaffisuco too? Weren't they getting back into active translating again? I haven't heard those intial terms before, IDK if they have time to reply but maybe you could tweet at doriko directly for clairification, even if you can't get a full answer on "what is this song about" or so~Raine

Hm, miku's in a classroom, so maybe it's the musical scale (EDBDF, FACE) Or just a random equation like ? = X (tho i suppose they would've just used 'X' in that case) is there anything on the YT or NND comments that might clarify/ask about what the intiials mean?

Shosho
https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/初音ミクの妄想_(Hatsune_Miku_no_Mousou)

Should this be downgraded?


 * Definitely not. ElectricRaichu (talk) 06:31, August 30, 2019 (UTC)

mie request
夕陽ケ丘に咲いた花は (Yuuhigaoka ni Saita Hana wa)

8.32
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ig-a4aJR3jM Could you check over this to see if the acoustic version has any lyrical differences? (I don't think *Luna's usually does, but  i know sometimes acoustic/piano/alternate versions of songs can have minor differences)~Raine


 * We had a couple of errors in the lyrics but both versions seem to be identical. ElectricRaichu (talk) 22:38, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Nounai zekkyou
Can you look at this? I was listening to it and it sounds like something other than "kanata"


 * There were several errors that I could find but the vocals were too fast and unclear so I don't know if I fixed everything. ElectricRaichu (talk) 08:36, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

Len request
https://youtu.be/zH-_Ns3lZdY

グランドキャバレー/masa request
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lOEILNZc-5E

I'm bad at interpreting stuff too lol. It references the humpty dumpty story but idk if that has any particular importance/big impact on the song overall. Len seems to be singing to another person about life? ~Raine

Mafumafu request
ジグソーパズル (Jigsaw Puzzle)

Shius request
ゆめにおちる (Yume ni Ochiru)

nonemu request
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QX_zj6gmcHI

Sure, I can take a listen.

tho at first glance, "bakenokawa" doesn't need to be separated? I know "bake" is its own noun for like ghost/spirit right? So does it need to be bake no kawa or does it always get grouped together when it's not like a proper noun like "Boku no..."


 * Good point. I looked it up and it seems to be one word. ElectricRaichu (talk) 05:11, September 13, 2019 (UTC)

Memeshii request
めめしいね (Memeshii ne) I don't think i've seen too many miki songs translated lately lol

Kirin
AO～いつだってすぐ側に～ (AO ~Itsu Datte Sugu Soba ni~) The song box links to the disambiguation rather than the main composer

Telecaster B-Boy (Suriii)
Hello! I hope you're having a good day. My request is Telecaster B-Boy. Thank you SolarTwT (talk) 21:15, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

Yeah i think it should help, be nice to have a shortcut saved but suppose there's only so much coding you can do, thanks~Angel

そこに命はありますか. (Soko ni Inochi wa Arimasu ka.) Also, can you check through this? Damesuke said it was 'neutral' and some 'misreadings', so wouldn't it be good to update/polish/tweak translations like this as much as possible? (esp for the less straightfoward/metaphorical songs, since those meanings/interpretations can be complex too)

6-7-5-1
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JQlxWRKbH1A Could you make a page for this when you have time?

Vale
https://youtu.be/wVfzrUPIZ7o New WanOpo song!

Ai ni Deai Koi wa Tsudzuku
Hey. If you're up to date with HoneyWorks, and you've seen my playlist, then you must know this song perfectly. I heard the Kotoha version, and I liked her voice, but I still preferred Sphere's original version. Well, the old me loves this song so much that he decided to have a go at translating it. Besides, the lyrics are simple. Stick around, because I'll have it up for you to check this weekend.

By the way, are you listening to any other HoneyWorks songs in my playlist? RandomAir BGM (talk) 01:10, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

"Let Us!" request
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XTyBL83N70k nice to see some group songs :3--Angel


 * This is a song from 2016 on Niconico. The mp3 is available on piapro. I've been wanting to get around to it for over a year ... hopefully one of these days. ElectricRaichu (talk) 06:54, September 19, 2019 (UTC)
 * Actually the mp3 is not on piapro, I was confusing it with season. ElectricRaichu (talk) 06:56, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

アドレナリンダンス
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Tp8nUEU57VM New 3/Surri song (epilepsy warning)

Telecaster B-boy Translation
Thank you so so much for the translation!!! Have a good day!

Oh, there are a few translations I would like you to check. I'll be linking them here:- Thank you once again!!!
 * Underground to Chiseigyo
 * Phorograph
 * Non-mellow

SolarTwT (talk) 05:34, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

@Solar: They should be fine, Vervain Subs/Tosiaki is on damesukekun's list~Raine

I did a few spot checks of random lines and the translations seem reasonable. If damesukekun says the translators know what they're doing, then I think they should be OK. ElectricRaichu (talk) 00:34, September 21, 2019 (UTC)

Thank you! I just wanted to double check since Tosiaki made changes to some of the lines, especially for Underground to Chiseigyo. SolarTwT (talk) 12:56, September 21, 2019 (UTC)

Connection
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QU8T1Ao7Bd8

ディアフレンド
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qmWghxlAJJU

Pandora
パンドラおもちゃ箱 (Pandora Omochabako) Would this not count as a 'cover' song? Toa's comment on NND says something like "i was allowed to make a miku version"


 * Much like HoneyWorks' songs, the two versions were uploaded around the same time. Toa has also worked on the original, so it seems to be more of a collaboration than a cover to me. Amandelen (talk) 21:12, September 21, 2019 (UTC)

Toa's comments says "I was allowed to do the tuning for a/the Miku version", so I think Amandelen is right. ElectricRaichu (talk) 03:15, September 22, 2019 (UTC)

リア充革命／山桜P
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zT3O4-eUy6I

Re: ユメミーガール
Hey,

That's a hard one. I personally prefer ユメミーガール (Yume Me Girl) because it looks better to me, but I don't think one is necessarily more correct than the other when looking at the rules. Puns are always hard to deal with in translations orz. Sorry I can't be of more help. Amandelen (talk) 09:34, September 23, 2019 (UTC)

奶z0
Hello, will the romaji for 奶z0 be "Naizo" ? SolarTwT (talk) 08:10, September 24, 2019 (UTC)

I see. I thought, since the word 「臓器」appears in the conversation towards the end, 奶z0 would be Naiz0 like 「内臓」but stylized. It seems a bit far-fetched though... Thanks for the changes!

SolarTwT (talk) 07:21, September 25, 2019 (UTC)

Great! Thank you TvT SolarTwT (talk) 08:25, September 25, 2019 (UTC)

Divela reply
Thanks, and wow, the song itself is fine, but i just realized, maybe the page needs a questionable content b/c miku's basically impaled in that thumbnail? even if it's stylized to look more 'beautiful' than graphic lol--Angel


 * I removed the picture just in case and let Amandelen know, but she thinks it's not bad enough to worry about so she restored it. I think we'll leave it like that unless anyone lets us know that they find it distressing. ElectricRaichu (talk) 10:10, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

Re: Soko ni Inochi wa Arimasu ka. picture
The image is of an impaled doll that resembles Miku. As there is no blood and no actual bodily harm I don't see a need to remove it. I undid your edit, but feel free to redo it if you disagree with me. Amandelen (talk) 09:29, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

mayuko
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YfDtxiaTLOA

Planetarium no Shinjitsu
Hi, just wanted to ask something about the translation of this song below. Damesukekun checked them and said there were grammatical and wording errors, but I wanted to know if the translation is completely unusable, or can be improved with a few tweaks.

''Even if you had the whole world in your hands You'd get bored with it soon enough That's why I hide myself from you''

The master key concealed in the pocket I made sure that it was still there again and again Like I was holding a ticket for two made of stars

Old rows of houses, a faded STOP sign You know, I wouldn't mind living here But only if you were with me

Our future projected on a planetarium Temporary galaxies and feelings Let's sing with the constellations of the 2 AM sky tonight We don't need a reason A life with you and me in it Those are the days I want to keep picturing in my mind Every minute, every second

The scenery I see from the passenger's seat May be different from the one you see in your mirror Just believe in the warmth we feel from each other's fingertips

I was in the shade, looking out at the sunny side of the street The one who reached out to me was you Nobody else but you

Our future projected on a planetarium Temporary galaxies and feelings Let's sing with the constellations of the 2 AM sky tonight We don't need a reason A life with you and me in it Those are the days I want to keep picturing in my mind Every minute, every second

When the prelude starts to play We blow out the candle over and over I want to be the star that shines on your street at night Hiding your sadness deep inside You spun those words of love for me Now I want to make it up to you with everything I have

Our future projected on a planetarium Temporary galaxies and feelings Let's sing with the constellations of the 2 AM sky tonight I won't let anyone say that this isn't real A life with you and me in it Those are the days I want to keep picturing in my mind Every minute, every second

On that day I saw The truth on a planetarium

There's a translation in the CC as well, just in case you want to check that too.

Thank you!!

SolarTwT (talk) 08:16, September 30, 2019 (UTC)

Removing NSFW lyrics
Hey,

I've just gotten a list from Tokina with pages deleted from VLW which had NSFW lyrics:

Gay Sex 超強烈快感嗡嗡嗡震動 (Chāo Qiángliè Kuàigǎn Wēngwēngwēng Zhèndòng) 淑女ベリィの作り方. (Shukujo Berry no Tsukurikata.) 赤と白と黒の系譜 (Aka to Shiro to Kuro no Keifu) ヴェノマニア公の狂気 (Venomania-kou no Kyouki) 標本少女 (Hyouhon Shoujo) Secrets of Wysteria Halloween Candy Funky Husky Cool Girls Broken child 警察蜀黍!!! 就是这个人!!! (Jǐngchá Shǔshǔ!!! Jiùshì Zhège Rén!!!) 叶公好龙 (Yègōnghàolóng) 援交ラプンツェル (Enkou Rapunzel)

I've also gotten a list with songs which had their lyrics removed. I've already removed some lyrics from pages which were on that list, and I'll get to the rest at a later time. I have to get to work now, but I'll send you a follow-up message about this later. Amandelen (talk) 09:23, September 30, 2019 (UTC)

I've removed the lyrics of the songs you mentioned. Some thoughts on the others:
 * I agree with your first point ("One reason... is extreme."). They probably removed the lyrics to make absolutely sure that they're complying with fandom's TOU. I'm not sure if we should do the same, since as you said the singer of the song and the narrator are not always the same person.


 * 叶公好龙 (Yègōnghàolóng): Moke it quite clearly drawn as a minor. The lyrics don't seem to be that sexual at first glance, but it is very much implied. I think due to that and the TOU's prohibition of describing non-consensual sex it was removed I think.
 * 赤と白と黒の系譜 (Aka to Shiro to Kuro no Keifu): This song loosely describes rape (I wrapped my cold fingers... The "white" that you gave me that day). It was likely removed for the same reason as 叶公好龙 (Yègōnghàolóng).
 * ヴェノマニア公の狂気 (Venomania-kou no Kyouki): Technically the described acts are non-consensual since the women were under Venomania's spell. I guess that's why it was removed?
 * Secrets of Wysteria: This song is about Albert Fish (honestly I suggest not reading the wikipedia article that I linked; it is very disturbing). He was a serial killer and child rapist. I think it has been removed due to that.
 * Amandelen (talk) 13:16, September 30, 2019 (UTC)


 * Hello (again),


 * Gave Amandelen the right reasons for the 4 pages. Technically she got right for the 2 first and the last one. For Venomania, it's also because... You remember who was in the victims? An animal and a little child. So pedophilia, so unacceptable for Fandom. After to be honest we know the song is extremely known and that the deletion is being under debate, but actually... The other article which pushed this deletion is this one.


 * For Secrets of Wysteria it's also because... It's Oliver who sings this, and since he is underaged... :/ We would have serious issues. :( Tokina8937 (talk) 14:35, September 30, 2019 (UTC)

The TOU only prohibits "...any content that is obscene, pornographic, abusive, offensive, profane, or otherwise violates any law or right of any third party, or content that contains homophobia, ethnic slurs, religious intolerance, or encourages criminal conduct;". But the Fandom Guidelines says "For text, content that just mentions characters have sex is likely to be OK. But content that describes exactly how they have sex, is not. Content that describes violent or non-consensual sex is expressly prohibited.". I think it's a bit vague since they aren't really clear what they mean with describing. Does mentioning something or alluding to it (like 赤と白と黒の系譜 (Aka to Shiro to Kuro no Keifu)) describe non-consensual sex? Or should it be described more clearly than that? I agree that mentioning rape automatically being a violation seems a bit extreme, especially since Game of Thrones wiki exists, which even has an article on rape. It seems to me that the best way to go about it would be to remove lyrics if they detail rape any further than mentioning that it happened or alluding to it (or when the lyrics glorify it, obviously). So basically I agree with what you proposed. Amandelen (talk) 15:22, October 1, 2019 (UTC)

hinayuki
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OK-ybp0qRl0

LamazeP
我こそ昆布大使館 (Ware koso Konbu Taishikan)

Could you do the romaji for this? I found the lyrics on a blog post linked directly on LamazeP's NND upload so i assume he's the owner of the blog or so~Raine


 * Looks like Solar did it. I tried but my edit got lost since my internet has been up and down a lot. ElectricRaichu (talk) 02:45, October 4, 2019 (UTC)

Himitsukitchi
Watashi wa Himitsukichi Does this need to be downgraded or censored?

Thanks, nice to see more wholesome songs ( i mean, i like 'gritty' songs too but nice to have a break as well haha.)


 * It has enough violence and bad language that I don't think we should downgrade it. ElectricRaichu (talk) 04:49, October 7, 2019 (UTC)

Explicit Lyrics and such
Hey,

I've worked though all the pages that still needed action. There were four songs that were borderline that I saved for last, and I wanted to inform you on what I did with those:
 * I transferred the lyrics from VAPOR CANNON and リボルバー (Revolver), since it's pretty clear what is happening and not up to interpretation (at least to me).
 * I removed the part in Hot Milk where sex was described. I feel that the other parts do not describe anything as explicitly as the parts I removed, so that's why I only removed that part.
 * I didn't do anything to 炎の娘 (Honoo no Musume), since the sexual parts are dressed up in metaphors and it's not that apparent what's going on like in VAPOR CANNON.

Feel free to undo any edits I made if you disagree. I'm not entirely sure about some of them myself, but I figured it's better to be save then sorry when dealing with these last four ones. Amandelen (talk) 12:18, October 7, 2019 (UTC)


 * Oops I'd kind of forgotten about Secrets of Wysteria. I personally think the lyrics are vague enough to stay, but I did remove them just to be sure (as the removal can always be undone). We should definitely remove the link to the Wikipedia article, though. I've removed the whole mention of Fish to prevent people from easily looking it up. Amandelen (talk) 10:23, October 8, 2019 (UTC)
 * Also, get well soon! Amandelen (talk) 10:24, October 8, 2019 (UTC)

Gunjou Breath
群青ブレス (Gunjou Breath) Can you check the accuracy of the description/author's comment? (And maybe some of Kzzoldyck's other contributions too)


 * The comment was translated accurately, although the original has since been deleted. ElectricRaichu (talk) 22:21, October 12, 2019 (UTC)

Nonfiction girl
シン・ノンフィクションガール (Shin Non-Fiction Girl)

Can you translate this when you have time? I don't think ppl translate rerulili's songs as much anymore--Angel

Reflamer
Thanks, it's also on the CC now, it just needs approval

https://www.youtube.com/timedtext_editor?action_mde_edit_form=1&v=QX_zj6gmcHI&lang=en&bl=watch&ui=hd&ref=wt&forceedit=captions&tab=captions&o=U&ar=1570917064030

White House request
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RXhIQq8nCbM&feature=youtu.be

Shinoder
https://youtu.be/kGb__j0aIxQ

Congratulations!
Hi, just wanted to congrats on your daughter's wedding!!!! Wishing her lots of happiness and health

SolarTwT (talk) 06:21, October 16, 2019 (UTC)

prescriptoion
https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/Prescription Could you update the credits? Not exactly sure what "歌入れ" is (i assume tuning but just wanna make sure)


 * Replied to Solar, but it's not tuning, it's mixing the vocals with the soundtrack. ElectricRaichu (talk) 03:27, October 20, 2019 (UTC)
 * Ah, okay, thanks for letting me know, I'll update their other song page as well, then. ~Raine
 * Ah, okay, thanks for letting me know, I'll update their other song page as well, then. ~Raine

Could you delete a duplicate comment please?
Could you please delete my duplicate comment on a song page? The anonymous one from just before I made an account. I noticed that somebody put my song on here and out of excitement I commented. Then I realized commenting with an account would probably be a better idea.

https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/Energy/GarrisonLMorton

GarrisonLMorton (talk) 07:25, October 20, 2019 (UTC)GarrisonLMorton

Bo-zu
BO-ZU Can you translate this when you have time, please?--Raine

I second this! It's one of my favourite songs this year SolarTwT (talk) 11:06, October 22, 2019 (UTC)


 * OK I'll try and look at it next. If I forget, don't be shy to remind me. ElectricRaichu (talk) 01:36, October 23, 2019 (UTC)
 * Update: Looks kinda difficult. I'll try my best but I don't know if I can figure all of it out. ElectricRaichu (talk) 03:08, October 27, 2019 (UTC)

Will focusing more on the rhythm and keeping the translation loose in meaning make it easier to translate? SolarTwT (talk) 07:54, November 7, 2019 (UTC)


 * Seems to contain a lot of Buddhist terminology. I'd have to research them and it might take a lot of work to translate. Trying to match the rhythm adds an extra level of complexity. ElectricRaichu (talk) 08:00, November 7, 2019 (UTC)

Yup, a lot of Buddhist references. I tried looking up some words and they'd be quite difficult to translate into English. Rhyming 椀下げ and one's again seems so genius to me for some reason XD Idk how you'd capture the same thing in English. It seems super time-consuming... Edit: I'm not very sure, but looking at it again, it seems to me like it's about a ping pong battle?/training to be a ping pong champion? but likened to the training Buddhist monks undergo, as a metaphor. The prequel to BO-ZU also is centered around the game so it kinda makes sense. The illust for the song suggests the same.

Also, what do you think about Festfes? It seems similar to BO-ZU except there are modern music/internet slang references instead. Which one do you think would be easier to translate?

SolarTwT (talk) 08:29, November 7, 2019 (UTC)

Scattered dreams request
https://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm35698374 it's nice to see easypop still being active :3 ~Angel

Tieredcrisis
ティアードクライシス (Tieredcrisis) Could you look at this?

For 怡楽, "iraku" I hear a diff word? Or it sounds like there's an "S" or so in front of it


 * It sounds like chiraku or shiraku to me. I found an obscure word 至楽 shiraku in one dictionary that means something similar so it's possible that it's a typo. Unless we ask the songwriter, however, we probably won't know.


 * BTW the English translation of that line seems strange. 怡楽(or 至楽)に塗れた means steeped in pleasure and probably refers to 尸解, but they've just put "happily" in the previous line which understates what it's trying to say. 尸解 seems to refer to the spirit leaving a dying body, or to it leaving a dying body and becoming some kind of enlightened being.


 * I did some spot checks and AFAICT I can't see any other mistakes, but it looks like a very difficult song to translate and they may have their reasons for the strange way they translated that line. Again, unless we contact the translator, we won't know their reasons. ElectricRaichu (talk) 09:29, October 24, 2019 (UTC)

Noz/Zoo request
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KFEbVsctk1M

Leaving
Hello Raichu, Thank you always for your great contributions to Vocaloid fandom. My job and daily chores are really killing me recently, and I decided to leave the fandom. I keep my account, but I'll be inactive and won't take requests any longer. Now I say goodbye to you all. Damesukekun (talk) 04:25, October 26, 2019 (UTC)
 * I wish the best luck to you too. Damesukekun (talk) 03:46, October 27, 2019 (UTC)

Autophagy
オートファジー (Autophagy) Could you check the translation?


 * The translation has some errors. I could try to fix it but I'll ask the translator first. ElectricRaichu (talk) 03:55, October 27, 2019 (UTC)

Deco captions
https://www.youtube.com/timedtext_editor?action_mde_edit_form=1&v=MeJDOXsCFgw&lang=en&bl=watch&ui=hd&ref=wt&tab=captions&o=U&ar=1572156024084 Could you take a look over these?

EZFG
https://youtu.be/RYsbNNRcnqc

Still cold
Hey,

When you have the time, could you maybe check this translation? I'm not sure who to ask now that Damesukekun is gone, so I hope you don't mind orz. We'll probably have to figure out how we're going to check translations more easily soon. Amandelen (talk) 09:22, October 27, 2019 (UTC)


 * While I like the English rendering of some lines, there are several mistakes, unfortunately including a few that are quite misleading. I like the song so I'd like try to fix the mistakes. ElectricRaichu (talk) 08:20, October 28, 2019 (UTC)

The only active native Japanese speakers (that I know of) on the recommended list are Firingsniper and Mera. If Raichu isn't too sure with something, I guess we could ask them? Other than that, I guess we have to cross check with other translators; Migu39 is quite active here and Spicy Sweets will most probably respond too. SolarTwT (talk) 11:00, October 27, 2019 (UTC)


 * Yes we really need to do something. I'm often stumped by some phrases and lines, I'm hopeless at interpretations, and I'm not a fast translator, so I can't take it all on myself :( But if we can manage to get a reliable team together, that would be great. ElectricRaichu (talk) 08:23, October 28, 2019 (UTC)

That's totally understandable. We could try asking Firingsniper, Mera, Migu39, and Spicy Sweets if they're interested in checking translations as well. Amandelen (talk) 10:08, October 28, 2019 (UTC)


 * If they're interested, it'd be nice to have a way to share the work, for example, ask if people have preferred producers, music styles or vocaloids. ElectricRaichu (talk) 10:12, October 28, 2019 (UTC)

That's a good idea. That way it'll be a bit more appealing. Do you want me to contact them or will you contact them? Either way is fine by me. Amandelen (talk) 10:22, October 28, 2019 (UTC)


 * I'm fairly busy right now with different things so it would help if you could do it. ElectricRaichu (talk) 00:31, October 29, 2019 (UTC)


 * I'll start drafting up a message and hopefully get to it this weekend. Amandelen (talk) 09:43, October 31, 2019 (UTC)

Rumor
ルーマー (Rumor) Could you take another look at this? Damesuke checked it but I find the "Getting out of my hand, I... I admit yours'  line a bit awkward/confusing?


 * Yes that line and some others have some strange English rendering. The translation is loose but OK in some places, but in others it seems too inaccurate to me. ElectricRaichu (talk) 04:04, October 28, 2019 (UTC)
 * I've made some changes including that strange translation. ElectricRaichu (talk) 04:37, October 28, 2019 (UTC)

Thanks, and yeah, i found this https://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm35862719 so it was meant to be singable 'translyrics' rather than a direct translation so that explains it being a bit odd :P

22 Seiki no Bokura wa
Could you check this when you have time? Edit: Caption link https://www.youtube.com/timedtext_editor?action_mde_edit_form=1&v=4m7SfAs2h2w&lang=en&bl=watch&ui=hd&ref=wt&tab=captions&o=U&ar=1572346017097

Harapeko
https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/%E3%81%AF%E3%82%89%E3%81%BA%E3%81%93%E3%81%AA%E3%82%93%E3%81%A7%E3%81%99!!_(Harapeko_Nan_Desu!!)?oldid=497198 Could you take a look at this?


 * The translation had a lot of mistakes but I think I managed to fix it. ElectricRaichu (talk) 00:09, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

ララララララララーメン
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1cKTJR2rLFg New Rin song, i think it's their first song as well

Shitoo
https://www.youtube.com/timedtext_editor?action_mde_edit_form=1&v=EJe2uS6h3cg&lang=en&bl=watch&ref=wt&forceedit=captions&tab=captions&o=U&ar=1572325036003 Could you look over these captions?


 * They seem mostly right. If you copy them here, let me know and I'll fix a couple of things. ElectricRaichu (talk) 21:24, October 29, 2019 (UTC)
 * Yes, I'll be adding them in a bit ~Raine
 * I fixed a few things. I added some bits they had left out and I changed a couple of other bits. Some mistakes in Kzzoldyck's romaji: そういう風に, 風 is fuu, not kaze, and 食べちゃいたい is a contraction of tabete shimaitai, not tabete wa itai. ElectricRaichu (talk) 03:46, October 30, 2019 (UTC)

Poppin' Candy☆Fever!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JCZCz0XQfRk

Yurufuwa Jukai Girl
https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/%E3%82%86%E3%82%8B%E3%81%B5%E3%82%8F%E6%A8%B9%E6%B5%B7%E3%82%AC%E3%83%BC%E3%83%AB_(Yurufuwa_Jukai_Girl)?diff=prev&oldid=498033 Could you check their edits?


 * I didn't look at them in context, but just based on the amended lines, the corrections look good to me. In the dictionary, 不法占拠 seems to mean squatting rather than loitering but maybe it's a deliberate exaggeration and the edits didn't change that bit. ElectricRaichu (talk) 07:21, October 31, 2019 (UTC)

Re: ‎Days/EasyPop
As long as the song contains a VOCALOID it should be in scope, so Days should be fine! Amandelen (talk) 09:45, October 31, 2019 (UTC)

Translations and such
Hey Raichu,

I've approach Spicy Sweets and Migu and they're willing to help out (Firingsniper hasn't answered yet). I've made a blog post where I plan on keeping track of the translations that need to be checked and are checked so you guys don't have to do that. Spicy Sweet's would like to split the songs on genre, so which genre would you prefer to check? Amandelen (talk) 22:44, November 2, 2019 (UTC)


 * Depends on song really. I guess mostly into pop, folk, light rock, reflective, kiddy, country, classical. Not so much into heavy rock, jazz, blues, creepy, disco, dubstep. Are there any other genres? ElectricRaichu (talk) 00:20, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

That should be most of them. Some others I can think of are hip hop, latin, electronic in general, house, R&B, soul, and metal (but metal kind of falls under heavy rock). Amandelen (talk) 10:40, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Dandan
だんだん増えてゆく (Dandan Fuete Yuku) Could you translate this when you have time? I assume it's similar to the other "dandan" songs 40mp made :'D~Raine

Reku
レクの空走 (Reku no Kuusou) Could you look over this? I don't think eng is their first language, and it's mostly understandable but it'd be good to take a closer look since it's part of a song series/connected to other songs


 * I see what you mean. I haven't been that well the last few days but I'll try to look when I feel better. ElectricRaichu (talk) 04:59, November 6, 2019 (UTC)
 * https://www.youtube.com/timedtext_editor?action_mde_edit_form=1&v=xozXubyXn5I&lang=en&bl=watch&ui=hd&ref=wt&forceedit=captions&tab=captions&o=U&ar=1573186071008 There's also some on screen text only quotes/'dialogue' that might need editing as well

Thanks!--Angel

Nakanaka
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wDNypuyOi10 could you check their subs? (rapid flashing warning btw)


 * It's difficult to read the Japanese text and there are a lot of unfamiliar words, but from what I could follow in the first minute, there seemes to be lots of mistakes. ElectricRaichu (talk) 00:36, November 12, 2019 (UTC)

Lamaze Request
私のお話聞いてほしい (Watashi no Ohanashi Kiite Hoshii)

togenkyo
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=osXiVyM86F8

The Ghost of Romantic Tranceiver
Hey,

Would "I want my voice to reach." be a good translation of 私の言葉が届いてほしいの? That was the translation on this page before it was replaced by Hazuki no Yume's one (I got it from somewhere but I can't find the source anymore), and I'm thinking of replacing it with just that. Since it's only one sentence I thought I'd be a bit of a bother to here, which is why I'm asking you directly. Please take your time. Amandelen (talk) 19:07, November 14, 2019 (UTC)


 * I have retranslated the song. Since HnY's translation is the most likely intended meaning, you'll notice that I happen to have have translated it the same except I've added a footnote about the ambiguity. Adding a gratuitous difference has problems. Just stopping at "reach" makes the English feel incomplete. Translating とどく as "get to" makes it ambiguous: "I want my words to hurt you". "Be delivered" suggests an intermediary. You can say "what I have to say" instead of "my words". However, I agree with HnY that a simple literal translation works best. ElectricRaichu (talk) 23:05, November 14, 2019 (UTC)


 * I see. Thank you! Amandelen (talk) 17:56, November 15, 2019 (UTC)

才能なんか
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a0CppXeSN1s&feature=youtu.be

Some songs
Here are some songs I think you might like and could use a translation.


 * Dream Keeper
 * Otogi wa Gin no Kuni
 * Crush
 * _(Otousan,_Okaasan.) Otousan, Okaasan
 * Minazuki no Tooriame

Edit: Also, 6-7-5-1 and 雨ニ酔ウ already have translations so you can remove them from your requests list :)SolarTwT (talk) 05:50, November 17, 2019 (UTC)

うさぎwithがーる
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4EhinP-GTls

Apostrophe
The lyrics for the remix version of version Apostrophe is the same, except for a few lines. Could you please translate those? Thank you! SolarTwT (talk) 14:49, November 17, 2019 (UTC)

Grand caberet
https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/%E3%82%B0%E3%83%A9%E3%83%B3%E3%83%89%E3%82%AD%E3%83%A3%E3%83%90%E3%83%AC%E3%83%BC_(GRAND_CABARET)?diff=prev&oldid=503710 Can you look over this when you get a chance?

夢が終わる時
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pwqoUQxYZ24&feature=youtu.be

VnaneP
https://www.youtube.com/timedtext_editor?action_mde_edit_form=1&v=lTaVm7fI8lE&lang=en&bl=watch&ui=hd&ref=wt&tab=captions&o=U&ar=1574221049088 Could you look at these captions when you have time?

LamazeP
https://old.reddit.com/r/Kagamine/comments/e0sunw/i_made_very_rough_translations_for_lamazes_new/ Could you check this?


 * Most of it is fine, although I there are some minor issues. I already had a translation I was holding off because there are some lines that are open to interpretation. Since I prefer my interpretation to keizee's, I've uploaded my translation. ElectricRaichu (talk) 02:30, November 25, 2019 (UTC)

teishokup
流星メテエシカ (Ryuusei Meteeshika)

Could you check over this? I think they're on the neutral list, but it makes me think there might be some things not completely accurate if they couldn't really translate the title properly/fully either :P~Angel
 * There were a couple of things I think were incorrect and I improved the wording a little bit in places. There were mistakes in the lyrics too. ElectricRaichu (talk) 05:04, November 25, 2019 (UTC)

Avarice
Can you make a disamb page for these two songs, please?

Avarice

AVARICE


 * Done. ElectricRaichu (talk) 04:51, November 26, 2019 (UTC)

Odoryanse
https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/Special:Contributions/66.27.46.137 Can you check their changes?


 * They seem good. The 蛙 line is the only one that I can't be sure of but UtaTen is in agreement with the amendment. ElectricRaichu (talk) 04:47, November 26, 2019 (UTC)

Kilmer
https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/%E3%82%AD%E3%83%AB%E3%83%9E%E3%83%BC_(Kilmer)?diff=prev&oldid=505607 Can you check this too, please?


 * Takuri is wrong, it doesn't make sense. As far as I can tell it sounds like eri eri. You can listen here if you want to check too. The other possiblity is yori for either or both words but it sounds more like eri to me. ElectricRaichu (talk) 06:45, November 26, 2019 (UTC)

ハジメモノガタリ
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_oIBeeY5L3A Can you translate this when you have time? :)

Mubou
I see thanks for letting me know (that said, it's still the same ban-evader who doesn't really seem to listen/follow our guidelines that closely)

Hajime Monogatari
Yeah, I didn't notice anything too 'off' There are a couple parts where she goes super high/hard to make out the words but i don't think she said anything different~Raine

Fukusui no koi
https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/%E8%A6%86%E6%B0%B4%E3%81%AE%E9%AF%89_(Fukusui_no_Koi)?diff=prev&oldid=506078

Can you check their edits?


 * All look good. There's some archaic kana usage e.g. writing 込もう as 込まう which the edits fix the romaji for. ElectricRaichu (talk) 10:01, November 28, 2019 (UTC)

sweet dreams request
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lAhMzTKfpn0&feature=youtu.be

Thanks! Have fun in Japan, i'm sure you could prolly check out a snow miku event (like wasn't there an airport specifically dedicated to it but idk if it's the same airport you'd be going to lol)