User blog comment:Vaffisuco/飴と鎖 Candy and Chains by Otetsu-P Tentative Translation/@comment-26239285-20180604004007/@comment-35531447-20180605020255

Very very true on all of those aspects. I always appreciate your keener eye for these types of things! After reading your comment, the 誰かが笑った浴びせる歓声 part is embarassing lol. I guess I just have a hard time with translating long modifers into English. Japanese sentence structure and way of thinking is just so different.

Regardless, I am very thankful for your prompt reply!