User blog:Vaffisuco/ブラックゴールド Tentative English Translation

This was in need of an English translation, as as Damesuke said on the Wikia Page the existing translation, while not totally off the mark, had some pretty grave misreadings. Below I will put down a rough/tentative translation.

When I am asked to decide which way to go, I spouted out a lie.

The people who directed be to the right ended up going to the left side.

In order to breath, in order to live

Was what you said

Putting it into words must've been pretty painful.

As I became covered in wounds, I laughed.

Scared of the things that could separate us, I ran away and averted my gaze

But I stop in my tracks, coming in and out of sight

And I am neither prepared to be or repay the victim

足を止め、見え隠れする

犠牲・代償　何の覚悟もない

''Not quite sure what the little 'dot' means in between the 'gisei' and 'daishou', and am uncertain if the 見え隠れする part acts as a modifier to 犠牲・代償. When listening, the する part seemed lower in inntonation.''

When I am asked to decide which way to go, I spouted out a lie.

The people who directed be to the right ended up going to the left side.

Putting it into words must've been pretty painful.

Even wishing all the time must've been pretty painful as well.

As I became covered in wounds, I laughed.

I'm so so scared of being separated, I just want to be by your side

I stop in my tracks, coming in and out of sight

Not prepared to be or repay the victim

So, what is 'truth'? Is it cold metal?

Look, hey! I'm walking

Walking away from you

So who made the final decision?

Where is our God?

Ah, how unfulfilling!

I separate from you and go far away

To the people that went to the left

I'll leave your last act of kindness right here, so it won't lose it's brilliance

The thing that drives people apart

'Victim and Compensation' that resolve

I grasp the black gold ring and the love that dangled from my neck

So my footprints won't dissapear

犠牲・代償、その覚悟

首から下げた愛情と

ブラックゴールドのリング握って

Is the proper order 「その覚悟と愛情も、私の首から下げた」or 「ブラックゴールドのリングと私の首から下げた愛情を握って」Or even 「首から下げた愛情はその覚悟ということ」?