Talk:破滅の予感とエクスタシー (Hametsu no Yokan to Ecstasy)/@comment-24366891-20160410215400/@comment-122.106.170.161-20160410234358

It's largely right and I like some of the wording so I would prefer to fix it rather than delete it. I found a few lines that are probably mistakes, but I don't understand some lines so I can't tell if this is all: NB There are some lines where the romaji is a duplicate of a previous line instead of being for that line. Someone who wants to listen to the song should fix it. I haven't got time right now.
 * 咲いては散りゆくパラダイム: "it follows the paradigm of scattering as soon as it blooms" (= the world has a dispensible sense of morality)
 * "bitch" is too strong (but we don't really have a word for "omae")
 * 懺悔の祈りを捧げる means just "offer prayer of confession", connoting begging for pardon, nothing about sacrifice
 * 欠けては満ちゆくパラディウム I think similarly means "it follows the paradigm of waxing and waning"
 * 予感 means "premonition", more specific than "feeling"