Talk:ナンセンス文学 (Nonsense Bungaku)/@comment-191.23.43.211-20170709233346/@comment-25324354-20170713195918

I checked the translation from the video with a Polish translation by Piniako (neutral translator because of her English) and it seems off compared to her version. The most distorted verses are (translation from Polish by me):

Original: 研ぎ澄んだ言の刃　大事そう　抱え笑って

Video: Grinding the blade of the word which is clear. Being as big as you ought to laugh.

Piniako: This sharpened knife of words seems to be important, that's why I hold it with smile.

Original: 心が病んでく　僕らは今日　生まれ変わりましょう

Video: My heart is sick, We are today; The origin it will change

Piniako: Our hearts are sick, so let's go today to be born again.

I know I have little knowledge about Japanese, but the translation from video you provided doesn't look gramatically correct.