User blog comment:Amandelen/Translations that need to be checked/@comment-44719384-20191226224528/@comment-38658275-20191227032653

It looks like it has some inaccurate parts, although some of it is correct but just awkwardly written too. It could certainly be made to sound more natural. Not sure what you mean with the katakana words, they are just Japanese words written in that script and look to all be translated appropriately. What do you think should be done differently with them?