Talk:正弦のセレナーデ (Seigen no Serenade)/@comment-1523675-20160206044916/@comment-161.202.88.118-20160224052647

Miharu: You got the following sentences completely wrong, and some of these are basic mistakes, like misreading of the subjects/objects, even when they are explicit. These are not "a few small insignificant edits." You won't improve if you're blind to your own mistakes.

Comes back to me whenever I'm happy.

If you touch me gently,

So then, when the end comes,

The light of hope,

Holding them close to my heart,

Like the sadness I feel now,

The silence is like singing, but it doesn't bother me.

Hey, I want to answer you.