Talk:炎の鳥、群青をゆく。 (Honoo no Tori, Gunjou o Yuku.)/@comment-27049858-20151007000345

There are some awkward stanza breaks with regard to where the original Japanese lyrics break and the English translation breaks. I am not sure of the best way to fix this or make a compromise with this, and I am reluctant to change someone else's upload on my first edit. I tried to break my translation in a way that best left the columns about equal sizes, but please let me know what your general convention is for this.