User talk:Ikhwan EQ-1

Hi, Welcome to the Wiki! It's always good to have more translators around.

Just having a quick look at your translation. I haven't listened to the whole song, but I skimmed through the translation and noted a few issues you might like to think about. Sorry I wish I had time to give you better feedback right now, but hopefully I've given you something to think about. ElectricRaichu (talk) 10:56, May 30, 2018 (UTC)
 * またか と慣れた守衛 might mean "the guard who has gotten used to saying 'you again'". Basically, it's not stated who is used to who/what, so you need to consider all the options and see which ones makes most sense.
 * 顔伏せたまま means "in the state of keeping my face down" so it probably joins up with the next line 逃げることだけを考えていた: "I only thought of running away while keeping my face down". It sounds strange to me joining it with the previous line.
 * この怠惰の成れの果て捨て去って might mean something like "if I cast off this lazy shadow of what I used to be". The subject and object are not explicitly marked, but it's more natural for "I" to be the subject and "成れの果て" to be the object (unless the context dictates otherwise).
 * 望んでここにやってきた can in theory mean "I wished [something] and came hear" but can also equally mean "I came hear seeking [something]", i.e., "at first I came hear because I was after something". Again, you need to consider all the options and see what fits the context better.